sukeshini??? ha dhada tar mala ajjibat aathvat nahiye.. kadhi hota ??
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asmadik: dhanyawad!
amruta: mala waTatey rasikyash aadhichya syllabus chya kaLatala aahe. malahi to sukeshini dhada athawat nahi. (kee to 50 marathi la wagaire hota?)
bahubali cha to photo kadhala tya weLi mee an ek mitra bike war gelo hoto gomateshwarala. blr hoon.
an gammat mhaNaje tithehi tya dhaDyacha (invariably) ullekh zalach, an aamhi barach weL punha highschool ayushyat buDalo hoto.
kokaNatale diwas wachalya pasoon mala tyat nond kelele padartha khaychi far icchha aahe. koNala te aThawat aahet kay? an koNi khalle aahet kay?
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sujay tu mhanatos te barobar asel kadachit. karan mala sukeshini dhada asalyche athavatey.
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sukeshini ha dhaDa 7vya ki 8vya vargat hota.
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bara baba mhataryanno! tumachi jeans niLi!
paN tya sukeshini dhaDyat hote tari kay?
tuLashi baget miLatat tasali wrundawane banawaNarya bai chi katha hoti kay?
btw koNala 5th chya maraThi chya pustakatale kahi tari aThawatey?
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ghal ghal pinga varya hee kavita aathavatey. tee suman kalyanpurani gayali aahe.
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baailaXa bahU baayakat baDbaDlaa AXaI ek Cana kivata hÜtI. (a kivatotÊ mahaBaartatlyaa iXaKnDIcao mast vaNa-na kolao Aaho. tÜ baayakaMcyaa saBaot svatÁcyaa vaIrpNaacao kÝtuk krIt AsatÜ AaiNa %yaa vaoLI Xa~uMcao AaËmaNa hÜto. gaancaI laUTalaUT hÜto. sagaLo jaNa madtIsa iXaKnDI kDo yaotat AaiNa maga %yaacaI ÔijatI hÜto. hI kivata kuNaalaa Aazvato kaÆ imaLola kaÆ kvaI kÜNaÆ
saukoiXaina : ha QaDa eka maulaIvar ilaihlyaa gaolaa Aaho. QaD\yaat saaMigatlao gaolao kI saukoiXaina naavaacaI AitXaya laaMba AaiNa sauMdr kosa AsalaolaI maulagaI baÝw iBaxaukaMnaa madt krNyaasaazI svatÁcao laaMba saLsaLnaaro kosa ivakto. mast QaDa hÜta. Amruta laa pNa ha QaDa nai@k Asaavaa pNa tI kdaicat ivasarlaI Asaola. hÜt AsaM kQaI kQaI²
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Rasikyash : 'Balish bahu...' kavita Moropantanchi aahe. pandav veshantar karun adnyatvasat virat rajachya ghari rahat hote. raja virat ladhait guntla hota. teva yuvraj badhai marat hota, paN pratyaksha yudhachya prasangi tyachi kaay avastha zali tyache varNan aahe.
majhya kade aahe ti purNa kavita. mhanje pustakatli aahe, ti sagli aahe ki nahi mahit nahi, paN 10 kadvi aahet. ethe sagLa type karNa shakya nahi. tyache marathi uchhar paN far kathin aahet. tula havi aahe ka?? mala smitam_02@yahoo.com yavar mail kar.
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Smanohar Qanyavaad² AgadI barÜbar. AXaIca hÜtI tI kivata. maI tulaa maola TaklaI Aaho. Aata tI kivata puNa- kÉna pazva. tuJyaa kDo jar 10 vaI cao pustk Asaola tr maga tr QaD\yaaMcaI naavao pNa saaMga mhNajao maga baro hÜla vaacaayalaa...
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rasik : tujhya dnyanat thodi bhar takato. shikandi mhanaje purvajanmichi Ambaa, jine bhishmancha sud ghenyasathi var magun ghetala hota aani nantar swatala jalun ghetale hote. ti pudhe shikhandi mhanun janmala aali aani bhishmanshi ladhatana arjunane tichya aadun sharsandhan kele pan bhishmani tyala reply dila nahi karan tyana mahiti hote ki shikahndi mhanaje purvajanmichi 'Ambaa' aahe
Aani tu jya kavitech areference dila aahes ti kavita ViraT rajachya mulavar (bahudha Uttar nav tyache) rachali geli aahe, ki to anta:purat mothya badhaya marat asato aani pratyaksha yuddhavar janyachi veL aalyavar ghabarato aani mag Arjun (jo tya velela bruhannada mhanun asato) tyala sarathya karayala lavato aani swata kauravanshi kadhato.
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Milinda, Smanohar tumha dÜGaaMcao mhNanao barÜbar Aaho. malaa tr Aata prt ekda mahaBaart pahayacaI [cCa hÜt Aaho. baI. Aar. caÜp`aMnaI mahaBaart mast pOkI rMgavalaolao Aaho. mahaBaartatIla p`%yaok pa~aMcaI detail maQyao maaihtI zovanao Krca kzINa vaaTto. pNa phayalaa vaa vaacaayalaa p`%yaok vaoLosa AanaMd hÜtÜ. AMbaaÊ AMibakaÊ AMbaalaIka (a tIGaIba_la puNa- kqaa malaa Aazvat naaih pNa to iXaKnDI ba_lacao maaihtI Aaho.
Smanohar tu tI kivata malaa lavakr maola kr maga maI tI lagaoca [kDo dovanaagarIt TaktÜ. maga AapNa cacaa- sau$ k$.
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Kunala ' amhi kon mhanuni kay pusata ' Hi keshav sutanchi kavita athavte ka ?
Ani acharya atryanni tyache widamban kele hote
'amhi kon mhanuni kay pusata datad wengaduni'
Yet asel tar post kara please
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Rasikyash, hoy 10vi chya pustakatunach miLali kavita. mi tula mail takliye.
majhyakade 7 vi pasun chi sagLi marathichi pustaka japun thevleli hoti, paN sadhya ti shodhayla lagtil, paN 10 vi cha agdi nit thevlela aahe, tula ajun kahi hava asel tar saang.
changlya savayin cha kadhi kadhi asa fayda hoto. :)
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waah junyaa dhaDyaanbaddala waachUna bare
waaTale.
sagaLA BB waachalaa aattaacha.
to dr. purNapaatre yaa.nchaa jo dhaDA hotaa
tyaache naava sonalii asecha hote.
tyaannii eka sa.nhiNa paaLalelii asate. tyaa
aadhii tyaanchii eka kutrI asate tiche naav
rupaalii. rupaalii sonali pekshaa moTThii asalyaane tichyaawara gurgurat ase.
sonali hI ekacha si.nhiNa tyaa.nchyaakaDe hotI.
sonalii laa waaDhawataanaa tyaannaa kase anubhava
aale aaNi tichaa laLA kasaa laagalaa hyaache
warNan aahe. tIlaa moThe jhaalyaawara gharaata
ThevaNe dhokyaache hote mhaNuna tyaannii tilaa
peshawe park madhye dile.
sonali ekaTi jaata navatI pinjaryaata mhaNuna
aadhii rupaalii laa aata soDale maga sonaalii
tichyaa maagomaaga gelii. aaNi jaraa weLAne
rupaliilaa haLUcha baaher kaaDhUna ghetale.
rasikyash balish bahu baayakaata baDabaDalaa
hI kavitaa post kara re.
aaNi ajUna eka kavItaa hotI
naarayaNa surve hyaanchii
bhaakarIchaa cha.ndra shodhaNyaata ji.ndagI
barbaada jhaalii ashI tyaamadhye eka oLa hotI
kuNAlaa aaThawata asalyaasa please ithe TAkU
shakaala kaa???
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nakula saÜnaalaI hoca %yaa QaD\yaacao naava hÜto. barÜbar² Cana vaaTlao vaacauna. ismata malaa tI baailaXyaacaI kivata maola krNaar Aaho maga maI lagaoca tI [qao pÜYT krNaar Aaho. tIcyaakDo dhavaIcao pustk Aaho. tIlaa Aata maI baroca kahI ivacaarNaar Aaho. tu vaaT pha.
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konakade satavitali 'Santh Nile he Pani' hi kavita ahe ka? mala watate Shirish Pai yanchi ahe ti. Mala athawatey thodi, konakade purna ahe ka ti.
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"Sonali". Khup motthaa dhada hota pan chhan hota. Sonyaasarakhi kaanti hoti mhanun tiche naav sonali, Naatichya rupaane gharat deep aala mhanun tiche naav Dipali ani kutryaachya pillache naav Rupali ase thevale gele.
Dhada vaachun Asmaadikaanahi vaatale hote ki ekhaada sinh, hatti, chitta palayala hava. Pan
ya dhadyaacha senti shevat (Sonalila peshawe baaget nenyaachi tayaari) vaachun to vichar sodun dila.
--- Asmaadik
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nakul tee kavita ashi aahe...
" Don diwas waat pahnyaat gele..
don dukhaat gele...
Hisheb kartoy doeewar kiti uralet unhaale..
shekdo wela chandra aala..taare ugaavle..raatra dhunda zaali...
bhaakricha chandra shodnyaatach jindagi barbaad zaali..
he haat maaze sadaiva daaridryakade gahaanach raahe..
kadhi chaatlele kadhi kalam zaalele paahile...!
Duniyecha wichaar harghadi kela..aga jagaamay zaalo..!
Dukhaa pelaave kase , punha jagaave kase, hyaach shaalet shiklo...!!
Don diwas waat pahnyaat gele ..don dukhaat gele..
hisheb kartoy doeewar kiti urlet unhaale..!
"
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Shailesh,
'Santh Nile he paani' hi PaDgaonkaranchi kavita hoti mala vatata!Purna nahi aathavat...Pan chhan hoti ewadha agadi aathavatay!
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5vi madhli mala ek kavita aathavtye..
'Girishikhramvaruni soge sutle dhaganche'
pan purna nahi aathavt :o( kunala aathavtye ka??
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dhanyawaada sandeep.
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AmaRta tulaa 5 vyaa vagaa-tlaI
vaaÉL vaaÉL mauMgyaaMcao vaa$LÊ ÌmaIikTkaMnaI baaMQalao vaa$L
hI kivata maaihtI Aaho kaÆ
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saMqa naILo ho paNaI
var Sauk`acaa tara
kurLyaa lahrImaQaunaI
SaIL GaalaItao vaara
dur kmaana pulaacaI
ekTIca AMQaarI
qarqar%yaa paNyaalaa
ksalao gaupIt ivacaarI
Baruna kajavyaanaI ha
camako ipMpLa saara
istmaIt haoAunaI toqao
AvacaIt qabako vaara
maqaoca ixatIjaavarunaI
vaIja lakakunaI jaaAI
Ana QyaanasQa igairhI
AuGaDunaI laaocana pahI
kIrkIr ratkIDyaancaI
inarvatosa AMQaarI
AaoZ laagaunaI Cayaa
qarqartI AMQaarI
saMqa naILo ho paNaI
var Sauk`acaa tara
drvaLalaa gaMQaanao
maaOnaacaa gaaBaara
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NO WAY ASMADIK! tsaa mauLIca Aqa- hÜt naahI.
malaa Aazvala AataÊ ititxaa mhNajao kYTÊ halaÊ ApoYTa sahNa krNyaacaI Xa>I. Asaaca %yaacaa Aqa- hÜtÜ. 10 vaI laa ek QaDa hÜta %yaat ha Xabd hÜta. kuNaalaa tÜ QaDa AazvatÜ kaÆ ismata tÜ QaDa XaÜQauna kaZ .. tulaa gaRhpaz dotÜ Aaho ;-) .
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ititxaa caa Aqa- Aaho XaaMtIÊ xamaa.
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Co² cauk² cauk² cauk²²²
maI saaMigatlaolaa Aqa- 100% barÜbar Aaho Asa malaa Ka~Inao vaaTt. it mhNajao tIna AaiNa itxaa mhNajao ek p`karcao dana vaa imaLalaolaI donagaI. maI jaÜ QaDa mhNatÜ Aaho %yaat %yaalaa tIna itxaa imaLalaolyaa Asatat jyaa kYTÊ halaÊ ApoYTa Asatat.
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AsmaadIkÊ ka ro kaya JaalaÆ tu jao ilaihla to tu KÜDuna ka TaklaÆ rahU Qyaayaca Asat.
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risak yaXa ititxaa Xabdaca Aqa- maI marazI XabdkÜYaatUna pahUna pÜsT kolaa Aaho . tU f> tuJyaa AMdajaavarca ivasaMbaUna Aahosa
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