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Gayee paNyyavar kaay mhaNooni aalyaa hi kavita poorNa maahit aahe kaa?
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hÜya
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Krupayaa post karNaar kaa?
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Deepte,
BETI navachya eka muline hee kavit ardhavat Takali hoti. Teech kavit mi ikaDe Takato aahe. Tu purNa kar.
Gayee paNyawar kay mhaNoon alya?
ka ga Ganga-jamunahee ya miLalya ?
ubhay pitaranchya chitt-choraTeela,
koN mazya bolale gorateela?
ushNa ware wahatee nasikat
Gulabala sukawitee kashmirat
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kudee motyachee, fool suwarNache,
haus baee puraweeen tuzee saree
pari awaree ha pralay mahabharee.
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Gawee jato aikata tyachkalee,
khaNee badaloonee tee balsruShtee gelee
gaLa ghaloonee karpash reshamacha,
wade yete mee por adnyawacha.
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dIpkÊ Cana² XaovaTI tuca hI kivata XaÜQauna kaZlaIsa. maI lagaoca print out Gaotlao. pNa kaya ro XaaLot Asatanaa hI kivata jara kmaI kDvyaaMcaI hÜtI kaÆ eovhZo sava- kDvao vaacalyaacao Aazvat naahI. AsaÜ. kivata dovanaagarItuna Taklyaba_la pTpT vaacauna JaalaI. Qanyavaad²
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kavee BEE che purNa naav kaay?
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malaahI Asaoca vaTto kI maI hI kivata pUvaI- vaacalaI tovha kmaI kDvyaaMcaI hÜtI.
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Asawari
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KUp KUp Cana vaaTlao hI kivata vaacaUna²²
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awsome dipak. khup bara vatla kavita vachun. shalet hi kavita kami kadvyanchich hoti. may be, space crunch asel.
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Deepakt
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Asawari, Felt very good reading your opinion after I posted "Gayee PaNyaawar---" kavita. My little daughter's name is also Aasawari and I have to sing everyday this kavita for her and then only she sleeps.
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Paankaj
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| | Thursday, August 15, 2002 - 7:58 pm: |
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she sleeps after listening to kavita?
no wonder...we also sleeps in KAVISAMMELAN
except when,i read my own poem.
don't you think asawari,that deepakt is torturing his daughter?
onother question....whether mother also sleeps?
if yes then all hubbys will make this poem by hard...
for their daughter's mother.
paankaj
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