kÜNaI pahit saMsaÌtaYa-ivaÊ kuNaI ihMdI nadImaa ijahIÊ
baMgaalaI maQauÊ rmyaasaI ]pvanao jaIÊ rMgaivatI ithIÊ
BaaYaa AaMQa`hI gauja-rÊ gaNaI knaa-TkI saÜjvaLaÊ
savaa-QaI@ya AXaI gamao BauvanaI hI maaJaI marazI malaa
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maatoica%yaa gaÜD dugQaamaRtacaI savaO Aamauica tÜDlyaapasaunaIÊ
tuJyaa dugQaavarI maayaBaaYao AamhI vaaZIlaÜ pÜsalaÜ AananaI ÈÈ
baMdI AXaa gaayanaanao krÜnaI gaLo Aamaucao kapIlao ho jarIÊ
gaatIla gaaNaI AamaucaI kbaMQao Kulyaa maaLranaavartIÈÈ
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Swapnhi Kaise Yave Tine Amhaa Nakarale
Devuni Dard Tyache Charge suddha Aakarale
Harlo nahui amhi Lagalo Kaami Punha
Sakarala ha taajmahal aamhi tya mumtajvina.....
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KalaIla AÜLIcaa Aqa- saaMgaa
yaoto ihmaaid`knyaapitsaUtlalanaa yaÝvanaa maajaI jaoMvha
ramas~Inaamakanaa%yajaUna ]rt to ipDIto hÜya toMvha
hist histMd`va`uMdaMtkmauKrIpucaonaamapuvaa-Qa- naahI
yaa laagaI BaUsautoXaaArIAnaujaip`yaa svalphI yaot naahI.
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yaoto ihmaaid` knyaa ³nadI´ itcaa ptI samaud` %yaacaa saut cand` %yaacaI lalanaa ra~ yaÝvanaat jaovha mhNajao maQya ra~I
ramas~I mhNajao saIta itcyaa navaatlaa kanaa kaZUna ]rto to saIt mhNajao qaMDIÊ ipDIto hÜya tovha
hist mhNajao hatatÊ histMd`va`uMd mhNajao h<aIcaa kLpÊ %yaacaa AMt krNaara isaMhÊ %yaacao mauK AsaNaar na`uisaMhÊ %yaacaa ArI ihrNyakXapUÊ %yaacyaa naavaacao puvaa-Qa- mhNajao ihrNya mhNajao saÜnaM naahI
yaa laagaI BaUsauta mhNajao saItaÊ itcaa Xa mhNajao ramaÊ %yaacaa ArI mhNajao ravaNaÊ %yaacaa Anauja mhNajao kuMBakNa-Ê %yaacaI ip`yaa inad`a svalphI yaot naahI.
qaÜD@yaatÊ maQyara~I qaMDI vaajato pNa paMGa$Na ivakt Gyaayalaa hatat pOsaa nasalyaamauLo JaÜp yaot naahI.
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Aata yaacaa pNa Aqa- saaMgaa
AlaIkula vahnaacao vahna AaiNat hÜto
XaXaIQar vahnaanao taiDlao maaga-pMqao
naidptI rIpu %yaacaa tat BaMgaÜnaI gaolaa
rvaIsaut mahIsaMgao far duÁiKt Jaalaa
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pahili ol nahi kalat aahe. (ali = bhunga)
Dusri ol :
shashidhar (Chandrala dharan karanara mhanje Shankar), vahanane (tyache vahan : Nandi) ne tadile margapanthe
Bailacha rastravar dhakka laagla
Tisri Ol : Nadipati (samudra) tyacha ripu (Agni ??) tyaca taat (Kumbha) bhangoni gela
madake futale
Chauhthi Ol :
Ravsut (Karna) Mahisange (Jaminiwar padalyamule)
jaminiwar padalyamule kanala laagale
Chauthi ol contextmadhe basat naahi asa vatate. Any takers ?
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pahili ol mala watate: bhunga jya war asto te kamal aani kamal jyat aste te paani... mhanje paani anit hote... ase asawe... what say asami?
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AtI sauMdr. ima~anaÜ tuimh mahana Aahat²
Aata yaacaa Aqa- saaMgaa
caarI caMd` BautlavaTI ek idnaI doiKlao
ramaa sanmauK ravaNaasa udyaI saIta QarI Aadro
eosao vaR<a ivacaI~ barvao caalao pha sava-da
baÜlao iva{la ha pdaqa- ]magaa YaNmaasaIcaa vaayada
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yeap panipuri tasach asel te. Mhanje Madakyamadhe paani bharoon anat asatana rastyamadhe bailacha dhakka lagoon madke jaminivar padoon futale ani khali padoon kanala pun lagale.
Pun he nantarche total bouncer gelay. Help !!!
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Asami
Varchya shlokacha sampoorna artha barobar sangitalass. Ekdon minor modifications.
Pahili oL :
Ali kul vahanache mhanje bhunga tyache vaahan je kaMal tyache vaahan mhanje paaNi aanat hote
Tisri Ol :
nadipati samudra tyacha ripu mhanje Agni navhe tar Agasti (Samudra prashanachi katha aathava) aani Tyacha taat mhanje Kumbh (Agasticha janma Kumbhaat zala ti goshta)
baki sagLe barobar ahe.
Good Work Asami,
Dusre kode mhanje shlesh alankaracha namuna vaatatoy. Mhanje chaarahi chandra jaminivar mhanje 1) Mukha Chandra ??? 2)3)4) ???
kinwa may be shabdnachi ultaapalat karaychi asel.
mhanje "Raavanaas Sanmukh seeta Rama aadare hrudayi dhare vagaire :-)
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