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Deemdu Monday, October 17, 2005 - 4:37 am:      ilaMbau maÜD Aa^na ha (a bb caa ivaYaya naahI pNa ..... hh jaI gaÜYT caMpk cyaa laxaat yaoto tI tuJyaa laxaat yao] nayao yao hI baat hjama nahI hÜtI ilaMbau maÜD Aa^Ô anyways yaÜga kqaa ekdma interesting Ê maaMDNaI sauroK XaovaT pya-Mt DÜ@yaalaa klhš

Rupali_rahul Monday, October 17, 2005 - 6:36 am:      yaÜga ekdma Ja@kasa. djao-dar AaiNa rhsyamaya maaMDNaI.

Pinaz Monday, October 17, 2005 - 6:55 am:      ima sagalao vacalaoÊ cana Aho pna naik kya badlayacao ho mala Krca klalao naih. kuina PlaoAsao sangaola kÆ ik mya ica%ya bba var ivacartt tsao [qao ivacaryacao nasatoÆ Aina PlaoAsao igairrjsariK caoXt kÉ nak. mala vaoidla klat naih. Ajauna naivana Aho ima. sagalyainca AÜlaK Jaila naih.

Pinaz Monday, October 17, 2005 - 6:56 am:      mi sagale wachale, chan ahe pan naki kay badalayache he mala kharach kalale nahi. kuni please sangel ka? ki my city bb war vicharatat tase ithe vicharayache nasate? ani please girirajsarakhi cheshta karu naka. mala vedila kalat nahi. ajun navin ahe mi. sagalyanchi olakh jhali nahi.}

Maitreyee Monday, October 17, 2005 - 7:21 am:      HH Aga iTklaI baajaUlaa zovailaya mhNaUnaca ho caalalaya baGa sagaLM ;-) anyway Ê XaovaT gauMDaLlaa Asao vaaTlao malaa. Acaanak kÜT- kqaocaI gaaDI supernatural kDo vaLlaI to jara ivaica~ vaaTlao. to STY maQao ksao laÜk Acaanak T/^k badlaUna puZcaa Baaga ilaihtat tsao ..

Milya Monday, October 17, 2005 - 7:22 am:      yaÜga : jabardstca ro mast ilahIlaI Aahosa. Aata puZcyaa janmaI XaXaaMk AaiNa XaalaInaI BaoTlaI ka ho saaMgaayalaa part II ilahI baGau.

Ratrani Monday, October 17, 2005 - 8:41 am:      yaÜga kqaa AavaDlaI. ihMdI isanaomaa ‘ karj ’ caI AazvaNa AalaI. ?iYa kpUrcyaa Xairrat dusaáyaacaa Aa%maa jaavaUna isammaI garovaalacaa sauD GaotÜ. kqaocaI maaMD\NaI sauroK hÜtI.

Asami Monday, October 17, 2005 - 10:10 am:      MT yog laa pNa %yaacyaa kÜáTaba_la Xaas~Iya AaQaar maaga bar yog MT cyaa mau_\yaaMnaa AnaumaÜdna. hatLNaI etc tuJyaasaazI duyyama Ahot. %yaa caaMgalyaa AsaNaarca. pNa navao p`kar ilaihtÜyasa hohI nasao qaÜDko.

Dineshvs Monday, October 17, 2005 - 11:23 am:      yaÜga maaMDNaI mhNauna kqaa Kup AavaDlaI. Ô> ek saucanaa krayacaI hÜtI. pNa tI šqao na krta šmaolanao kolaI tr caalaola ka Æ karNa yaa saucanaocaa puZlyaa kqaosaazI }pyaÜga hܚla.

Yog Monday, October 17, 2005 - 11:28 am:      Dinesh, ja$rÊ suggestions are always welcome, here or in email (ypjoshi@hotmail.com). thx !

Hawa_hawai Monday, October 17, 2005 - 1:43 pm:      caMpkÊ DImaDu saala idlao nasalao trI sauwa p`%yaok DayarI hI 1 jan to 31st dec AXaI vaYa-BaracaI Asato tovha ekaca DayarI maQao ABaI ]f- XaXaaMk yaavaYaI-cyaa AÜ@TÜbar AaiNa puZIla vaYaI-cyaa AÜ@TÜbar caI naÜMd krNaar naahI. MT barM maga iTklaI laavaUna vaaca %yaanao maoMdu kayaa-nvaIt hܚla tuJaa. ;-)

Dhondopant Monday, October 17, 2005 - 6:12 pm:      saurvaat Ap`tIma²²²... Aamacyaasaar#yaanaI yaÜga laa kaya saaMgaavao²² .... pNa XaovaT BaÝitk jagaatlaaca Asata tr baro Jaalao Asato. maoMduÆÆ...

Avdhut Monday, October 17, 2005 - 9:44 pm:      yaÜgaÊ XaovaT ApunakÜBaI nahI Jaopa Boss . tÜ ABaI AsaÜ vaa XaXaaMk pNa kÜNaI p`oma krayalaa laagalaa tr svaIkar krayalaaca hvaa kaÆ naakarlao mhNauna kÜNaI Aa%mah%yaa krayalaa gaolaa tr %yaat nakar doNyaaáyaacaI kaya caukÆ yaotÜ Baut banako pICo pD gayaa. AsaÜ baakI %yaa ABaIcao kama XaalaInaInao Aa%mah%yaa krtaca saMplao hÜto maga tÜ kosa ka laZvat basalaaÆ

Meggi Tuesday, October 18, 2005 - 1:16 am:      malaa maaJyaa p`XnaaMcaI ]<arM AjaUna naahI imaLalaI

Yog Tuesday, October 18, 2005 - 1:25 am:      Meggi, check ur HG-mail.

Gs1 Tuesday, October 18, 2005 - 4:13 am:      yaÜgaÊ ek vaogaLI kqaaklpnaa. idnaoXaÊ n^n ba_la Qanyavaad. malaa naohomaI BaoDsaavatÜ ha p`Xna.

Punyanagarikar Tuesday, October 18, 2005 - 8:32 am:      vaogaLI kqaa. XaovaT samajaNao jara AvaGaD gaolaM AvaQaUt nao ivacaarlaolaoca p`YNa malaa pNa pDlao. gaÜYTM vaacatanaa maa~ majaa AalaI.

Yog Tuesday, October 18, 2005 - 12:06 pm:      manDLIÊ p`itËIyaanba_la Qanyavaad ² Avdhut Ê tuJao pihlao dÜna p`XNa nagaNya AahotÊ karNa kuzlyaahI kqaosandBaa-t to ivacaarta yaotIla. %yaa p`XNaamaagao tuJa logic AsaU Xakola pNa kqaotIla XaailanaI ca naahI. kqaot tI svatacaa inaNa-ya GaotoÊ ka va ksao yaacaI paXva-BaUmaI va pirisqatI kqaot ilaihlaI gaolaI Aaho. as fr ur last qest: well tovhDa Baaga yaa kqaot Xabdat ilahIlaa naahIyaoÊ i chose it that way, casue subtlty in my openion is impo for suspense/thriller. sagaLca spoon feeding Asaola tr tI kqaa dha p`karo ilahIta yaovaU Xakto. Reader is liable to make his own interpretations ho gaRhIt Qarlao Aaho. yaa janmaat ÔD@yaanvar maat krNaoÊ ho svatalaa nyaaya imaLvaNyaa[tkca XaXaank laa mah%vaaca hÜt. " tumacyaa nyaayasa<aocyaa pilakDo... yaa pircCodatUna %yaalaa jayant laa toca saangaayaca hÜtÊ pNa tirhI jayant cyaa "real court" maQao to saangaUna %yaalaa htbala krNa was more apt. Ê karNa ek p`karo XaXaank nao tÜ jayacyaa nyaayavyavasqaovar ]gavalaolaa saUD AahoÊ ³AanQaLI nyaayadovata..Ê yaa vaa@yaatUna to AiBap`ot Aaho.´ AND I have assumed that the reader will "absorb and realise" that aspect of the story. pNa yaahI janmaat XaXaank / ABaI laa Aa%mah<yaa kravaI laagato ha %yaa ivaiQailaKIt nyaayaacaa maÜbadlaa Aaho. Kr tr XaovaTcyaa pÜsT maQao AjaUna ek pircCod ilahIlaa hÜta jaÜ ima delete kolaaÊ which was after this line: %yaaca idvaXaI yaa kosacaa inakala laagalaa hÜta. it goes like this: jayant ÔDkoÊ ivaiQailaKItacaa nyaaya " jagaNyaasaazI " malaa yaahI janmaI svatacaa Ant kravaa laagalaaÊ tÜ maÜbadlaa yaavaoLI ima KuXaInao idlaa hÜtaÊ du#K ekca kI maaJaI Aa%mah<yaaÊ tumacyaa kÜTa-t maaJaa gaunha ³punha´isaQQa krNaar ² pNa tirhI ÔDkoÊ tumhalaa kaya vaaTtÊ yaa KTlyaacaa inakala yaahIvaoLI tumacyaa baajaUnao laagaolaÊ XaailanaIcaa maÜbadlaa dovaUna Æ As They say Nothing is Free ! and then followed that last para... to eokUna jaya KucaI-t kÜsaLlaa.... pNaÊ maaJyaa dRYTIkÜnaatUna it was giving away too much and making something too obvious to the reader... or rather making them think in my way ! ima kqaa ilahItÜ tovhaÊ vaacakanao ekacaÊ ikvvaa eKaVaca ivaXaIYT AntavarÊ inaNa-yaavar yaavaI mhNaUna navhoÊ ivaXaoYatÁ maanavaI Baava sambanQaancaI kqaa ittkI black n white AsaU Xakt naahI Asa maaJa mat. kqaocaa maUL gaaBaa pkDUna %yaa AnauXangaanao vaatavarNa inaima-tI k$naÊ maga vaacakalaa eKaVa mau_\yaapya-nt vaa deciding moment pya-nt AaNaUna saÜDNao ho maaJao laoKk mhNaUna svaatn~\ya ikvvaa kt-vya zrto. pUZo vaacak kuzlaa Ant %yaatUna phatÜ ikvvaa inavaDtÜ is his/her perogative ! Ôar kmaI kqaa AXaa AsaU XaktIla where the conclusion could be too obvious or where the writer leads the reader to a certain compulsive, definite conclusion Aata XaXaank nao punaja-nmaca ka Gaotlaa ikvvaa BaUt banaUna maagao ka laagalaa ³yaa kqaot %yaalaa BaUt na banataÊ p`<yaxa ABaI caa janma GaovaUna he has to work towards the justice ! ha ma*%vaacaa Baaga vaogaLa´ Asaa p`XNa kuNaI ivacaarlaa tr kqaa ilahayacaI garjaca naahI. pNa sagaLo p`XNa Ana ]<ar [tkI sarLÊ saÜpIÊ saaQaI Ana Aaplyaa manaasaarKI GaDlaI AsatI tr Aaplyaalaa Ô> pncatn~ca ilahava laagaola ² hope in my limited capacity,i answered some of the questions raised by people here. c.b.d.g. Aata Kro Wachak yaotIla.. AaiNa kqaocaa V&C krtIla

Chinnu Tuesday, October 18, 2005 - 1:13 pm:      magacaa AazvaDa qaÜD gaDbaiDt gaolaaÊ %yamauLo vaacalao naaih. Aaja vaacalaI kqaa. yaÜgaÊ tumhI risak Aahat. tumhI kolaola ica~aMca vaNa-naÊ AgadI ica~ DÜL\yasamaÜr AaNaNaaro Aaho. KTlyaasaarKI Éxa baaba AaiNa eka ica~karacaI maanaisakta² samatÜla sauroK saaQalaat. sahI²²

Champak Wednesday, October 19, 2005 - 8:48 am:      mah%p`yaasaanao vaoLat vaoL kaZunaÊ to hI AXyaa Tašmaalaa² yaÜga nao ilaihlaolaI kqaa vaacauNa caMPyaa jaagaa Jaalaa..... Ana %yaanao yaÜga laa kahI p`Xna ivacaarlao.... 1´ ABaI jar XaXaaMk caa punaja-nma hÜta tr tÜ XaXaaMk saarKa ka idsat navhtaƳroÔ. krNa Ajau-na naavaacaa hanamaarpT´ 2´ ABaI laa jar XaalaInaI maahItI hÜtI tr tÜ 20 vaYao- %yaa p`dQa-naa cyaa inaima<aasaazI ka vaaT phat qaaMbalaaÆ %yaalaa [tr ]zavadar ica~o phayacaI hÜtI kaÆ 3´ABaI ha ca XaXaaMk ho Asao XaailanaI cyaa AMtma-naa cyaa Aavaajaanao ka saaMigatlao naahIÆ k tÜ AMtma-naa caa Aavaaja Ô> [Tailayana laÜkaMnaa ca eoku yaotÜ.Æ 4´ saaQao absolute ethanol ivakt Gyaayacao tr exicse Ana t%sama iDpaT-maoMT caI prvaanagaI laagatoÊ maga ABaI laa KCN ksao imaLalaoÆ [qao ABaI LTTE XaI saMbaMQaIt hÜta kaÆ 5´ hllaI KCN sauwa [tko BaosaL Asato ik QaD reactions pNa jaat naahItÊ maga ABaI laa [tko PyauAr ksao imaLalaoÆ %yaanao kuzuna smagala kolao hÜto kaÆ Ana kolao hÜto t @kuzunaÆ (a p`XnaaMcaI ]<aro na dota jar yaÜga gaPp basauna rahIlaa tr %yaacyaa PC cao tukDo tukDo hÜ]na jaatIla......... .......... Asao mhNauna caMPyaa punha %yaacyaa la^ba cyaa A/c laa ]laTa laTku laagalaa²

Sayonara Wednesday, October 19, 2005 - 8:57 am:      caMpkÊ tuJyaa p`Xna ek cao ]<ar. punaja-nmaat pihlyaa janmaasaarKM idsaayalaa hvaM AsaM kuNaI saaMigatlaMyaÆ

Prajaktad Wednesday, October 19, 2005 - 10:45 am:      yaÜga²kqaa Kup AavaDilaÊXaovaTpya-Mt iKLvauna zovato. XaovaTih vaogaLaca kolaasa.

Yog Wednesday, October 19, 2005 - 10:47 am:      BaarI ro camPyaa.. iK iK iK

Mbhure Wednesday, October 19, 2005 - 4:47 pm:      yaÜgaÊ p`qama puNa- kqaa vaacalaI AaiNa maga AiBap`ayahI vaacalao. hI caaMgalaI kI kÜjaaigarIÊ (asaazI Ta^sa kravaa laagaola. Just Superb!! malaa tr tÜ saMidgQa XaovaTca AavaDlaa. naahItrÊ ihMdI rhsyapTasaarKoÊ Kra KunaI ikMvaa gaunhogaar gaun(acao saMdBaa-saiht spYTIkrNa krtÜ. XaovaTpya-Mt ]%saukta vaaTlaI. ikMcaIt punaja-nmaacaa saMXaya vaaTlaa pNa Guarantee navhtI. Canaca²²

Somesh Thursday, October 20, 2005 - 2:03 am:      simply GRRRRRRRRRRR888 !!! superb !!!

Kohindedev Thursday, October 20, 2005 - 2:41 am:      khooooopaaachhhh chhhhhhaaaaannnnn...waaa!!! kya bat hai.......ekdam sahi re sahi.....

Rajas_h Saturday, October 22, 2005 - 12:23 am:      namaskar caMpk saahoba. maI maayabaÜlaIvar naivanaca AalaÜ Aaho. jar AapNaasa saayanaašD paihjao Asaola tr malaa ka^nT\yaa@T kra. svastat imaLvauna došla. ijava gaolaa naaih tr pOXao prt. maaNausa maarayacaI gyaarMTI. yaÜga kqaa Ôarca AavaD\laI. sauhasa naMtr tuca. ³sauXaI´

Srk Saturday, October 22, 2005 - 3:04 am:      campk sahI. iDmDu maaJaI CÜTIXaI Xanka AahoÊ ilambau maÜD Aa^na / Aa^Ô mhNajao kayaÆ

Jo_s Saturday, October 22, 2005 - 5:45 am:      yaÜgaÊ Kasaca XaovaT jara jaD AahoÊ pNa sagaLca ivaskTUna ilahayacaI garja naahI.

Pardesi Saturday, October 22, 2005 - 9:55 am:      yaÜgaÊ kqaa AaiNa laoKnaXaOlaI dÜnhI tÜDIsa tÜD. Ap`itma ²²

Avdhut Saturday, October 22, 2005 - 7:29 pm:      Yog maaJyaa comment ba_la xamaa AsaavaI. maaJao p`Xna caMpkcyaa p`Xnaa saarKo idsatat tsao to AiBap`ot navhto. They needs to be re-worded. Detailed explanation ba_la Qanyavaad. Aata chanpak ba_la kaya mhNaavao. Oct-17 laa %yaanao kqaocyaa XaovaTavar comment ilahIlaI va Oct-19 laa tÜ prt JaÜpot kqaa vaacauna jaagaa Jaalaa va %yaalaa p`Xna pDlaot. Mod - Please delete my old comment.

Kandapohe Sunday, October 23, 2005 - 11:12 pm:      yaÜga kqaa AavaDlaI AaiNa kLlaI sauwa.³ Explaination vaacaayacyaa AaQaI.´ pihlao pÜYT vaacalao tovha malaa Asao vaaTlao hÜto kI jayaMtca XaalaInaIcaa Kuna krtÜ AaiNa AaL dusaáyaavar GaotÜ. pNa tÜ dusara maa~ jayaMtcao KunaI Aaho ho isaw krtÜ. AaiNa jayaMtlaa XaalaInaIcyaa Kunaacaa maÜbadlaa imaLtÜ. maoDla²² mastca hÜtI kqaa. sauhsa iXarvaLkrÊ baabaurava Anaa-Lkr style ....

Ra_na_jadhav Friday, November 04, 2005 - 7:23 am:      yaÜga kqaa Kup Cana vaaTlaI.

Chafa Friday, November 04, 2005 - 2:26 pm:      maIdoKIla hI kqaa prvaaca vaacalaI. pNa tovha [qao kulaUp laavalao Asalyaanao p`itiËyaa navhtI dota AalaI. yaÜgaÊ ilahINyaacaI XaOlaI farca sauroK Aaho.

Dakshina Friday, November 18, 2005 - 7:15 am:      Oh My God! kaya gaÜYTM Aaho hI.. XaovaTpya-Mt Xvaasa rÜKUna vaacalaI... yaÜga...kqaa Solid rMgavalaI Aahosa. vaacatanaa malaa ‘kÜmaa’ pustkacaI AazvaNa JaalaIÊ to pustk pNa maI AsaMca Xvaasa rÜKUna vaacalaM hÜtM. Great! Keep It Up!

Swapnalim Saturday, January 14, 2006 - 6:42 am:      योग, कथा खूपच अवडली. अगदी मस्त जमलीय. मला अशा कथा movies खुप अवडतात जे वाचनान्तर बराच वेळ डोक्यात घोळत रहातात. खरतर ही कथा वाचताना रत्नाकर मतकरी ची कथा वाचतेय अस feeling आल. Great work! Keep it up and keep posting new stories