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Gs1
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 8:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message



p`qama dÜna gaÜYTI spYT k$ [icCtÜ.

1 : KalaIla saMGaTnaaMXaI maaJaa kuzlyaahI p`karcaa saMbaMQa naahI.

A : kivataMcaa mahapUr yaÜjanaa.
ba : sa>Icao kavya saMttIinayamana maÜcaa-.
k : vaa vaa pirYad ³ kXaalaahI vaa vaa gaT ´
D : vaa vaa pirYad ³ ekmaokaMnaaca vaa vaa gaT ´
š : hmaKasa Apmaanaaspd p`itsaad mahamaMDL

2 : yaa laoKat maI maaJaI kovaL vaOya>Ik matoca maaMDlaI AsaUna maaJaI [tr kuzlyaahI p`karcaI mato maaMDlaolaI naahIt.


kavyaga`hNa

ekUNaca marazI kavyajagatatIla kavyaacaI AaiNa kvaIMcaI da$ na AXaI isqatI baGauna maI ha laoK ilahayalaa Gaotlaa Aaho. kavyaacaa AaiNa to vaacaNaaáyaaMcaa Kalaavalaolaa djaa- baGauna maI vaoLÜvaoLI ³ ivaXaoYat : maaJyaa AaXayagaBa- kivataMnaa dad na dota [traMcyaa rMjak kivataMnaa piblak TaL\yaa ipTto toMvha´ far far icaMtIt hÜt AalaÜ Aaho.

XaovaTI kavyaacaa AaiNa rsaga`hNaacaa djaa- ]McaavaNyaasa maaJaa hatBaar mhNaUna maIca ek mahana mahakavya ilahuna svat : ca %yaacao rsaga`hNa krNyaacaa ha AiBanava p`yaÜga AaplyaasamaÜr zovatÜ Aaho.

ho mahakavya eka pMcakat saamaavalaolao AsaUnaÊ yaatunaca to itrL\yaaMsaarKo XaairrIk vaOgauNyaanao yau> naahIÊ caarÜL\yaaMsaarKo iqallar naahIÊ CMdbaQd gaItaMsaarKo Ìi~ma naahI AaiNa navakivatosaarKo Xabd\baMbaaL caáhaT naahI Asao vaacakaMcyaa laxaat yaoto.

ho kavya kuzlyaahI p`cailat vaR<aat na baaMQataÊ Kr-ma KjaUr KK-r yaa svaricat ArbaI vaR<aat maÜkaT saÜDlao Aaho.
ha raxasagaNavaR<aacaa ek p`kar AsaUna yaoqao dusaáyaa AÜLIt yatI yao}na itsaáyaa AÜLIt jaatÜ Asaa kahIMcaa ³ ihmaalayaatIla ´AnauBava Aaho.

tr Aata sau$ krtÜ

maaJyaa p`omaacaa dgaD

‘maaJyaa’ yaa Xabdanao sauÉvaat k$na maanavaacyaa svakoMd`It vaRtIvar yaoqao kvaInao ³ mhNajao maI ´ naomako baÜT zovalao Aaho. hllaI barocasao kavya ‘maIÊ maaJaa’ yaapasaunaca sau$ hÜto AaiNa saMpto AsaohI yaoqao daKvauna doNyaat Aalao Aaho.

‘p`omaacaa’ yaa Xabdatuna ‘maI’ naMtr saucaNaarI dusarI gaÜYT ma*Najao p`oma ho laxaat ANaUna idlao Aaho.

itsara Xabd ‘dgaD’ Aata kvaIcao AlaÝkIk vaogaLopNa hLUhLU spYT hÜ}laagato. dgaD yaa XabdatUna jyaa Aivacalatocaa baÜQa hÜtÜ %yaap`maaNaoca maaJao p`omahI ho na hlaNaaroÊ vajanadarÊ Ba@kma va iTka} Aaho Asao yaa pihlyaa AÜLItUnaca kLto.

maaJyaa p`omaacaa dgaD
tuJyaa manaacyaa tL\yaat

pihlyaa AÜLIt maaJyaa tr dusaáyaa AÜLIt tuJyaa ² tuJyaa ha Xabd dusaáyaa AÜLIt Gao]na dusaáyaaMcao Aaplyaa jaIvanaatIla duyyama sqaana yaoqao kvaInao AQaÜroKIt kolao Aaho. yaatUna kvaIcaI AlaÝkIk AXaI p`itBaa tr idsaUna yaotoca pNa %yaacyaa idvya gaiNatI p`&ocaa sauQda saaxaa%kar hÜtÜ.

‘manaacyaa tL\yaat..’ @yaa baat hO ² yaoqao kvaI Jara mhNaU Xaklaa AsataÊ saagar mhNaU Xaklaa Asata vaa nadIhI mhNaU Xaklaa Asata. pNa naahIÊ yaoqao tLo Asaa Xabd vaap$na ek navaoca pirmaaNa p`aPt k$na idlao Aaho maanavaI manaacyaa vaOivaQyaalaa. tLo mhNajao kaya Æ paJar tlaavaÊ XaottLoÊ Jaalaoca tr kÜlhapur pQdtIcaa baMQaara...baGaa kXaI Baaga paDto hI AÜL Aaplyaalaa ivacaar krayalaa.... inataMt p`XnasauMdr Aaho hI AÜL.

maaJyaa p`omaacaa dgaD
tuJyaa manaacyaa tL\yaat
Jaalaa jaoMvha Dubauk

‘Jaalaa jaoMvha’ yaa XabdatUna vaacakaMcaI ]%saukta taNalaI jaato AaiNa maga tÜ ËaMtIkarI Xabd yaotÜ....

‘Dubauk’ AhahaÊ punha punha eokavaosao vaaTto ro ho Dubauk.... pNa kovaL yaatIla ivalaxaNa naadmaaQauyaa-var ifda hÜ} nakaÊ naIT KÜ|||lavar Aqa- XaÜQaa. p`omaacaa dgaD manaacyaa tL\yaat pDtaMnaa idsalaa Asao kvaI kuzohI mhNat naahIÊ tÜ ‘Dubauk’ Jaalaa Asao mhNatÜÊ %yaacaa Aavaaja eokU Aalaa Asao mhNatÜ toMvhaca tÜ ‘p`oma AaMQaLo Asato pNa baihro nasato’ yaa Aajavar laplaolyaa XaaXvat vaOiXvak sa%yaacaa puna$ccaar krt AsatÜ.

%yaaiXavaaya p`omaacaa manaalaa spXa- hÜtaca %yaavarhI dgaDacaa tL\yaalaa spXa- JaalyaasaarKo trMga ]ztat hohI caturpNao daKvauna yaa p`itkaMcaI samap-kta i~gauNaIt krtÜ.

maaJyaa p`omaacaa dgaD
tuJyaa manaacyaa tL\yaat
Jaalaa jaoMvha Dubauk
toMvha toqao hÜto

yaa tIna Xabdat tr vaahkaMcaI ]%kMza iXagaolaa pÜhÜcato. puZo kaya Jaalao Æ itqao kaya hÜto Æ Asao Anaok p`Xna manaat ÉMjaI GaalaU laagatatÊ manaacaI ivalaxaNa Gaalamaola hÜ} laagato AaiNa yaa sagaL\yaat kvaI maa~ iktI sahjapNao AaiNa isqatp`&tonao mhNaUna jaatÜ ‘toMvha itqao hÜto..’ Krca ro natmastk vhayalaa hÜto AXaa p`itBaopuZo. iXavaaya toMvha itqao hÜto yaa AÜLItUna p`qamaca ek kalasaapoxa pirmaaNa kivatolaa p`aPt hÜto. toMvha itqao hÜto tr Aa<aa kuzo Aaho Æ naMtr kuzo gaolao Æ AXaI ek gauZtocaI DUbahI AapÜAapca inamaa-Na hÜto.

maaJyaa p`omaacaa dgaD
tuJyaa manaacyaa tL\yaat
Jaalaa jaoMvha Dubauk
toMvha toqao hÜto
AaNaKI kahI baoDuk...²

‘Dubauk’

A<yaucca ² mahana mahakavyaacaa mahana XaovaT ²² baoDuk yaa Xabdatca saaro kahI yao}na jaato baGaa. p`%yaokalaa vaaTt Asato AapNa ekTocaÊ AapNa vaogaLoca. pNa p`%yaxaat maa~ Asao Anaok manamaMDuk Asalyaacao AnauBavaasa yaoto Asaa Qa@ka kvaI Aaplyaa AhMkarasa dotÜ. ‘maaJyaa’ yaa AhMkardXa-k Xabdanao sau$ hÜNaaro ho mahakavya XaovaTI Aaplyaaca AhM laa Qa@ka doto yaahUna AiQak kavyaa%mak nyaaya kaya AsaU XaktÜ Æ

‘kupatlaoca maMDuk baahor yaot naahIt tr tL\yaatlao kaya yaoNaar’ yaa eka jaunyaa icanaI mhNaIcyaa p`kaXaat yaa AÜLIkDo paihlao mhNajao manauYya ekda p`omaat pDlaa kI kayamacaa kamaatuna gaolaa hohI yaa izkaNaI idsaUna yaot Aaho.
AaQaI pihlaa Xabd kXaasaazIÊ dusarI AÜL kÜNaasaazI Asaa gaiNatI kaTokÜrpNaa baaLgaNaaáyaa kvaInao yaoqao maa~ baoDkaMcaI inaiXcat saM#yaa na dota kovaL kahI Asaa saUcak ]llaoK kolaa Aaho. yaatuna p`omaat gaiNat caalat naahI Asao KubaInao daKvauna idlao Aaho.

Aamacao prmaima~ va qaÜr saimaxak EaI. kaiXanaaqa vyankT icarfaDo yaaMnaI mhTlyaap`maaNao yaa kivatocaI vyaaimaEa i~jyaa kaLjaacyaa saapoxaI pirGaabaahor GaÜTaLto AaiNa Aqaa-cyaa Ì~Ima caÝkTI Baoduna saKÜla va ma} hÜto ho AapNahI AnauBavalao Asaolaca.

savaa-t ma*%vaacao mhNajao kivatocao XaIYa-k XaovaTI do}na ivad`ÜhI kivatoXaI AatD\yaacao naato jaÜDNyaacaa kvaInao p`ya%na kolaolaa idsaUna yaotÜ. pNa ekMdr kivatocaIca AaiNa rsaga`hNaacaI ivad`ÜhI maaMDNaI krayacaI Jaalyaasa puZIlap`maaNao krta yaošla.....pNa tI punha kQaItrI.

malaa Ka~I Aaho kI maaJao ho Kga`asa kavyaga`hNa vaacauna Aaplyaa kavyaivaYayak jaaiNavaaMnaa laagalaolao ga`hNa kahI p`maaNaat trI sauTola. AaiNa tmaama kvaIMnaa va risakaMnaa puZcyaa vaaTcaalaIt ]pyaÜgaI pDola.

maIca maagao kQaItrI mhTlyaap`maaNao

AaQaI sfurto kivata
AaiNa maga icakTtÜ Aqa-
Aaplyaa tÜMDacaI cava AapNaca zrvaa
mauKI kuzlaahI AsaÜ pdaqa-

hoca kavyaga`hNaatIla malaa samajalaolao AMtIma sa%ya Aaho ²




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Pha
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 8:19 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

>> ‘Dubauk’
>> A<yaucca ² mahana mahakavyaacaa mahana XaovaT ²²
GS1 sahI ilaihlaMyasa...

Gajanandesai
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 8:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

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Dineshvs
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 12:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

št@yaa ]cca kÜTIcaa kiva Aahosa tu to Aajaca kLlao.

Aamhalaa vagaLa gatp`aNa hܚla t%xaNaI kavyaQaara

Asao inaiXcat mhNau XaktÜsa tuÊ ro

Hems
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 1:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS1 .. GR81 .. !!!

Neelu_n
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 2:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saih ro jaIesa.. [tko ]%Ëuz ³Kga`asa´kavyaga`hNa maI p`qamaca vaacalao..
[tkyaa AaXayapuNa- AaiNa vaOcaairk kivata tu ilaih%ca rha naaihtr tmaama vaacak
³maayabaÜilavarcao´ eka mahana :-):-) kivalaa parKo hÜitla.....

vaacauna kavya tuJao

xaNaBar Jaalao istimat

DÜL\yaasamaÜr psarlao

gaDd gaihro Qauko

Lalu
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 2:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


maaJaahI %yaa ‘AÊ baÊ k DÊ š’ saMGaTnaaMXaI kahI saMbaMQa naahI. pNa ho laoKna ‘ivanaÜdI saaih%ya’ maQao Asaayalaa hvao hÜto Asao maaJao ‘vaOyai>k’ mat AahoÊ [tr kuzlyaahI p`karcao naahI.

Yog
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 3:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Gs1,
mast ro² pNa AMtIma sa<ya vagaOro... maga ho ilaKaNa Jaonakivata yaa navyaa XaIYa-kaKalaI krta yaošla.. :-)

Punyanagarikar
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 3:53 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS1 >>Dubauk.. .. ..
saihca..

Milindaa
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 4:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS, AXa@ya ilaihlaM Aahosa

Dhondopant
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 4:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS kavyaga`hNa Aflaatuna ... ivanaÜdacyaa baIbaIvar pNa caalalao Asato.

Ldhule
Wednesday, April 13, 2005 - 10:04 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS Canaca ilaihlayasa. Aflaatuna .
‘manamaoMDuk’ ]DImaaÉna dgaDavar basalaa... punha ‘Dubauk’²² :-)


Champak
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 2:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

tLM s tLM s tLM s

tLM ss tLM ss tLM ss

tLM sss tLM sss tLM sss .............

..... Dubauk :-)

Joo
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 4:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ha ha ha...:-)
jaI esaÊ
sahIca..²²²

Slarti
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 5:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS, jiyo !! AflaatUna Aaho. Aata ‘A­ba­k­D­š’ yaaMcaa saamaudaiyak maÜcaa- Aalaa tr %yaalaa tÜMD Vayalaa navaI ‘f’ LI ]BaarNaar kayaÆ ;))

Shriramb
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 5:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

sahee lihilayes GS!
majaa aalaa!

Sanjuda
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 6:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

samaIxaocaI BaaYaa AaiNa %yaasaazI inavaDlaolaI kivata AflaatUna ² Canaca Tr ]DvalaI Aahosa ²
AjaUna yao} do ²²

Paragkan
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 11:15 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

hehehe ... khaasach !

Sami
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 11:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS1, sahIca ilaihlao Aahosa²

Rachana_barve
Thursday, April 14, 2005 - 10:47 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS1 sahI mast ilaihlaoya²²²²

Komalrishabh
Friday, April 15, 2005 - 11:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS AflaatUna ilaihlaM Aaho ² :-)

Avdhut
Friday, April 15, 2005 - 5:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Fandu, Fadu, Great, Fantastic

Upas
Tuesday, April 19, 2005 - 12:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS.. simply great.. JaoMDUcaI fulao AazvalaI.. :-)

Neelu_n
Tuesday, April 19, 2005 - 4:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS Aaimh sava- Aata tumacao navaIna mahakavya AaiNa %yaacao rsaga`hNa yaacyaa p`itxaot AahÜt
trI sava- risak vaacakaMnaa lavakrca tuimh naivana saaih%yaËutI saadr krala AXaI AaXaa Aaho. :-)

Gs1
Thursday, April 21, 2005 - 1:03 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`itsaadaMba_la savaa-Mnaa mana : puva-k Qanyavaad.

kahI ivaGnasaMtÜYaI maMDLIMnaI ho ilaKaNa ivanaÜdI laoKnavar hlavaavao Asao mhNaUna evaZ\yaa gaMBaIr ivaYayaacaI TvaaLI sau$ kolaI Aaho.
ho sava-jaNa iXarÜmaNaI kavyaQaara p`itbaMQak kimaTIcao sadsya Asalyaacao kLto. pNa maI Asaa ‘baQa’Naar naahI ho %yaaMnaI laxaat zovaavao.

naIlaUÊ AhÜ tumhIca Taka eKado kavyaÊ AamhI Anaok jaNa AahÜtca ga`hNa laavaayalaa....




Wakdya
Thursday, April 21, 2005 - 1:11 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

GS1 Ìpyaa puZIla ilaMk baGaavaI
18 eip`la rÜjaIcyaa saÝ jaIesa yaaMcao gaayanaacyaa kaya-Ëmaacaa vaR<aaMt

Nandita
Thursday, April 21, 2005 - 2:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Dubauk Dubauk Dubauk ...




 
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