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Paragkan
Thursday, May 23, 2002 - 3:09 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

aha ...
mala moju de
jakhameche vay
... class !

Kshipra
Friday, May 24, 2002 - 1:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saÝrBaÊ

ekdma mast kivata. AitXaya kmaI Xabdat Baava pÜhÜcatat.


Saurabh
Saturday, May 25, 2002 - 3:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

exactly kshipra. kivata krNao (a concept caa essence pkDlaa Aaho (a maaNasaanao. mhNaUnaca malaa AitXaya AavaDtat %yaaMcyaa kivata

Kshipra
Saturday, May 25, 2002 - 9:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saÝrBaÊ

AjaUna ek vaOiXaYT tuJyaa laxaat Aalao kaÆ iËyaapdaMcaa AitXaya kmaI vaapr.


Saurabh
Sunday, June 09, 2002 - 11:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


jvar

AgnaImaQalyaa
nhaNavalaIlaa
dahuna doha
Aaja imaLalaoM
AnagaD doNaoM
Anaqa-vaahI.....

laajauna jvaalaa
vaLlyaa KalaIM
payatLIMcaa
banaunaI AiLtaÊ
Ana caZlaa jvar
AamhalaahI²²


Ashishchaskar
Monday, June 10, 2002 - 3:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saÝrBaÊ
Ôarca Cana Aahot yaa kivata. maI Ajauna yaaMcao kahIca vaacalao naahI. %yaaMcyaa pustkaMcaI naavao saaMgatÜsa kaÆ AaiNa saQyaa tI ]plabQa Aahot kaÆ nasalyaasa baakI
source kayaÆ
thanx in advance.

Saurabh
Tuesday, June 11, 2002 - 5:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Aro AaXaIYaÊ (a sagaL\yaa kivata ekaca kivata saMga`hatlyaa Aahot : " tL\yaatlyaa saa]lyaa " . maI %yaaMcao AjaUna kahI vaacalaolao naaihyao. i was hoping bakiche lokahi contribute karu shakatil :-)

Saurabh
Tuesday, June 18, 2002 - 5:55 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


AvaoL

kXaasaazI AÜzIM
JauMjaumauMjau gaIt
ivaklaI maI p`It
saaMjavaoLI

vaoDavalao hat
gauMifXaI gaL\yaaMt
yaoqaoM AQaI- rat
AaMQaLIca

kXaalaa hI AataM
AÜlaavao papNaI
papacaI laavaNaI
JaalyaavarI Æ

fuTUM do huMdko
AÜMjaL gahaNa
maaJyaaXaI [maana
naahIM maaJaoM


Saurabh
Tuesday, June 18, 2002 - 6:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


jyaaMnaa puÉYaÜ<ama paiTlaaMcyaa kavyaat rsa Aaho AXaaMsaazI : %yaaMcaa ‘pirdana’ naavaacaahI ek kivata saMga`h Aaho Asao kLalao. Aqaa-t maI AjaUna vaacalaa naaihyao. BaartatUna maagavaIna mhNatÜya. %yaa kivatasaMga`hat iva. vaa. iXarvaaDkraMnaI paiTlaaMba_la ho ilaihlao Aaho :

puÉYaÜ<ama paiTla ho marazItIla ek Avvala djaa-cao kvaI Aahot. %yaaMnaI p`orNaa baÜrkraMsaar#yaa qaÜr kivaMkDUna GaotlaI AsaolaÊ pNa %yaaMcaI kivata kuzohI AnaukrNaacyaa iknvaa p`qaocyaa AaharI gaolaolaI naahI. ]VanaatIla eKaVa ekakIÊ baajaUlaa Asalaolyaa fUlavaolaIsaarKI tI itcyaaca Aa%maanaMdat AaiNa magnatot fulat raihlaI. AnauBavaaMcaa AaiNa AaivaYkaracaa Asaa AaiNa [tka svatM~Ê AilaPt vaogaLopNaa far qaÜD\yaa kvaIMt saapDU Xakola. qaÜDa jaanapd vaatavarNaacaa iXaDkavaa Asalaa trI hI kivata kuzlyaa vagaI-krNaat svatÁlaa baaMQaUna Gaot naahI. itcaI saMpUNa- baaMiQalakI svatÁXaI svatÁcyaa Baavap`ÌtIXaI Aaho. s~IpuÉYaatIla AakYa-Na ha (a kivatocaa ek gauNaivaXaoYa Aaho. ho AakYa-Na naohomaIca p`omaacyaa patLIvar jaato Asao naahI. fulapaKro fulaaMcaoca rMga Gao]na kÜXaatUna baahor yaotat %yaap`maaNao %yaaMcaI kivata Anaokda samaÜr idsaNaaáyaa dRXyaanao ivaismat hÜtoÊ %yaatIla saÝMdya-Ê naadÊ rMgaivalaasa yaaMnaI BaaravaUna jaato AaiNa to sava- Aa%masaat k$na %yaacyaa gaBa-$pat svatÁlaa saakar krto. Aqaa-t AnauBavaapasaUna AaivaYkarapya-Mt hÜNaaáyaa p`iËyaot kvaIcyaa trla saMvaodnaonao AaiNa p`itBaonao tI saMskairt hÜto AaiNa ek ÉpsauMdr ica~a%mak AaiNa imatBaaiYaNaI kavyavaR<aI AaplyaasamaÜr ]BaI rahto. Aqaa-t ho %yaaMcyaa sava- kavyaaMcao ica~ navho. saÔla ivaÔla p`omaacaaÊ inasagaa-tIla sauMdrtocaahI tI yaaca XaOlaInao AaivaYkar krto. %yaaMcyaa saaáyaaca kavyaacao ho pRqagaa~ saamaqya- Aaho kI to tumacyaa dohtolaa spXa- krtca tumacyaa AMtÁkrNaat to p`vaoXa krto.

iktI samap-k inarIxaNa Aaho ho²


Mugdharani
Tuesday, June 18, 2002 - 8:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saurabh :
‘AvaoL’ Kupca Cana Aaho.
iXarvaaDkraMnaI AgadI Acauk vaNa-na kola Aaho....ek ÉpsauMdr ica~a%mak AaiNa imatBaaiYaNaI kavyavaR<aI ²


Vaatsaru
Tuesday, June 18, 2002 - 2:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saÝrBa
puÉYaÜ<ama paTlaaMcyaa kivata AitXayaca sauMdr Aahot AaiNa %yaa vaacalyaavar malaa rahUna rahUna ho AaXcaya- vaaTto Aaho kI (aAaQaI maI %yaaMcao naava kQaIca ksao eoklao naahI Æ


Paragkan
Tuesday, June 18, 2002 - 2:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

‘imatBaaYaI kavyavaR<aI’ ... AgadI samap-k. Krca ha maaNaUsa kmaIt kmaI Xabdat KUp AfaT saaMgaUna jaatÜ.

Ashishchaskar
Tuesday, June 18, 2002 - 4:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saurabh,
go on..khoop anaaMd deto aahes.


Saurabh
Saturday, July 06, 2002 - 12:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


[tukoM saÜpoM

[tukoM saÜpoM..... haMkolaa naca ]<ar doNaoM
paz iÔrvaunaI maaqyaavaÉnaI GauMGaT GaoNaoM
]rI Anaavar svaistkaMtlao hat baaMQaNaoM....²

AiQak saÜpI.... puZIla stbQataÊ tsaoM qaaMbaNaoM
payaamaQalyaa maasaÜLIcaoM maÝna pahNaoM
ivaGaD baaMgaD\yaa hataMmaQalyaa kaZuna GaoNaoM.....²

saÜpoM yaahuna.... kmarmaoKlaa saMqa inaKLNaoM
AQaIr paTla pLsafulaaMcaa jaaL pahNaoM
najar poTtaM %yaa rMgaaMnaI idvasa ivaJaivaNaoM....²


Saurabh
Saturday, July 06, 2002 - 12:44 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


JauLUk

inaragasa hMsaUM nayao
AsaoM Kalacyaa maanaonaoM
³....vaLtaMnaa baÜlaUM nayao
saayavaaLlyaa AÜMzanaoM²´

f> ÔoMkavao A<ar
vaairyaacyaa JauLukInaoM
maaqyaavarcaa pdr
jara Jaukavaa laajaonaoM....


Paaus
Tuesday, July 09, 2002 - 11:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saurabh,
simply great.
liheet rahaa.

Paragkan
Wednesday, July 10, 2002 - 3:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

jabari ... khas !!

Sanket
Wednesday, July 10, 2002 - 8:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaah .....²
eka dmaat sava- kivata vaacalyaa ²
AaiNa malaa naahI vaaTt ...papNyaaMcaI ]GaDJaap naohmaIp`maaNao caalaU hÜtI maaJaI......kdaicat qaaMbalaIca hÜtI.
baap kivata...²


Purrushottam Patilanna manacha mujaraa !

sahi re saurabh, changala kaam kelayas !

Saurabh
Friday, July 12, 2002 - 12:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


KoL

tUMca mhNaailasa
rÜKUna DÜLo
³vaoL saaQaunaI´ :
‘KoL Asaa ka kQaI rMgat܃

paz ifrvaunaI
hMsat sahjaÊ pNa
saavaQa vadlaÜM :
‘tala Asaa ka
tÜla maagat܃

tÜMca paihlaoM
najar JaukvaunaI
jahr GaÜTtaM
qaoMba sauKacaa
ksaa izbaktÜ....


Bhalya
Tuesday, January 21, 2003 - 10:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

saÝrBaÊ baáyaaca idvasaat kaih ilaihla naaihsa [qaM..

Saurabh
Tuesday, January 21, 2003 - 7:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

KrMyaÊ ilahIna lavakrca ...

Saurabh
Friday, March 07, 2003 - 7:11 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


]GaD\yaavartIM

prvalaaMtlaoM
kLo na laaGava
haMk QaIT tI
ÔoMk BaabaDI

iÔko [Yaaro
nakÜt AataM
AaNa gaL\yaacaI
hvaI tovaZI

jaunaI puraNaI
nakÜt vaLNaoM
sara[tacyaa
caalaI saavaQa

vaaT AsaUM do
qaoT naIT Ana\
]GaD\yaavartIM
GaDuM do parQa....


Saurabh
Friday, March 07, 2003 - 7:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


]nhacyaa dohat

hla@yaa spXaa-t
gaLajaD hat

TpÜáyaa DÜL\yaaMt
DÜLo pahtat

imaTlyaa AÜzaMt
va`Na hasatat

kaMcalyaa vaLaMt
kLa ]nhtat....

]nhacyaa dohat
saa]lyaa hÜtat²


Paragkan
Saturday, March 08, 2003 - 6:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

classic .. .. !!!

Saurabh
Wednesday, March 12, 2003 - 7:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


caZtIcaoM }na

caZtIcaoM }na
GaaXaI gaÜrI paz
baaBauLfulaaMcaa
hLdIcaa qaaT

laalavaNa pÜt
poTto gaL\yaaMt
kQaIMcaaca tap
ihmaanaI kL\yaaMt²

DÜhacyaa kaMzaXaI
najar laagato
ivaGa-LUna $p
laaT dRYTavato

.... caZtIcao }na
jaLIM ]trtoM
gaÜáyaa pazIvar
pdr GaalatoM²



Saurabh
Wednesday, March 12, 2003 - 7:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


gaulaala

panaaMcyaa kujabaujaI[t@yaa
naajauk inaÁXvaasaaMcyaa Xapqaa
Xarmalaolyaa.

najaroMt trMgaNaarIM
Alavaar AaXvaasanaoM
AasavaaMt gaÜzlaolaI.

trIih -
QauLIMt pOMjaNa tuTlaolaIM
samau%sauk pavalaoM
gaulaala ]QaLIt
prt ifrlaolaI.....


Itsme
Thursday, March 13, 2003 - 5:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

khupach chhan aahet sagalyach kavita ... mi pahilyandach wachalya PPn chya kavita ... kharach tyanchya ajun kahi kavita sangrahanchi nave tu ithe post karashil ka ?

Saurabh
Thursday, March 13, 2003 - 4:40 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


malaa saQyaatrI AjaUna ekca saMga`h maiht Aaho ‘pirdana’.


Saurabh
Thursday, March 27, 2003 - 6:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


AMgaBar QaUL

TpÜáyaa DÜL\yaaMtkI saMqa thana
³tUM tr AjaUna KLKL lahana.....´

JaaDacyaa AaDÜXaalaa fDfDtÜ pdr
³faMVaMnaa maahIt kuzlaa ha bahr....´

]gaacaca tÜMDavar ifrtÜ hat
³AÜzaMvar KuNaa.... Aaplaoca datÆ´

AaBaaLalaa BaÜMvaL... maatIXaI lagaT koilasa kaMÆ
³AMgaBar QaUL.... trI gaalaaMt hlako hMsalaIsa kaMÆ´


Paragkan
Thursday, March 27, 2003 - 8:49 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ashakya aahe re ha maaNus ...

Saurabh
Thursday, July 10, 2003 - 2:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


Aaja AMvasa saaMvaLI

Aaja AMvasa saaMvaLI
haMsao laaK caaMdNyaaMnaIM
maoGa laagaT pLalao
xaubQa vaaáyaacyaa baÜlaaMnaI

toMca caaMdNyaacaoM haMsaUM
PyaalaoM AÜZ\yaacaoM hoM paNaI
kXaI naXaot baoBaana
%yaacaI KLKL vaaNaI

kaMzavarI ]BaI raš
DÜlaoÊ ]saasao tRPtIMt
Anaavar AÜZ\yaavar
ZaLI sauKacaoM saMgaIt

saaroM KuYaIMt hoM rana
AXaI AMvasa sauKacaI
AaiNa %yaaMtih hLUMca
caLo Xaoja kaLÜKacaI...


Saurabh
Thursday, July 10, 2003 - 2:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


kDa

phaTocyaa kÜvaL\yaa ]nhaMt
Bar duparcaI Aaga Pyaailasa kXaIÆ
]jaL saÜnasaLa idvasa AsaUna
kajaLratIgat Byaailasa kXaIÆ

jaašjaušcaa Xvaasa AsaUna
qaoT BaoTmaÜgarI Jaailasa kXaIÆ
BaÜMvaL yaoNaar maaiht AsaUna
kD\yaavar kaM maga ]BaI AXaIÆ


Ashishchaskar
Thursday, July 10, 2003 - 7:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

mahana ²² ­­ ­­ ­­

Saurabh
Tuesday, July 15, 2003 - 3:02 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


kL

kÜsaLtoM }na navao
hLd taplaIca jara
AÜMzavar XaaMt ismatoM
pNa salatÜ DMK ]ra²

iKdLt ha jalasaMcaya
laaTaMcyaa vanagaÜYTI
ekTIca CayaaÌit
ivarGaLtaMnaa kYTI....

tL dUraMt ivaEabQa
ikrNaaMcyaa spXaa-naoM
kL kÜáyaa ]nhaMtlaI
japlaI pNa DÜhanaoM²


Asami
Tuesday, July 15, 2003 - 1:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ha manushya limit aahe re.....




 
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