Milya
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shahana : aho tumhi jo arht vivechan kelay to amhala hi mahitiy ho ani hehi mahitiy ki nustya sinhasan picture sathi hi kavita lihili nahiye...
suresh bhatani ti tya adhich lihili ahe.. (chu. bhu. dhya ghya..) pan parat tumacha sur chukichaa ahe.. asu amhi kadachit samanya manase.. amhi nahi petun uthalo hi kavita vachun pan mhanun tila dad deunch naye kay? karodatala ekhada tari petun uthelach ki nahi?... ani kharicha vatyala kay arth ase tumhi mhantay... pan sari janata jevha petun uthali tevhach swatantrya milale na apalyala ka faqt netyanchya balavar swatantya milale?
ithe tumhi soyiskar ritya amhi uchalalelya mudyana bagal det ahat... tumhi te khodun kadhayache sodun
ulat tyababat cheshtecha sur lavalela distoy ithe... tevha hyapudhe hya sambhashnat mi bhag ghein ki nahi he mala mahit nahi... tumache chaalu dya
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Storvi
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 12:55 am: |
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vachleli sagli postings baghun he lihinara/lihinari konihi mala adnyani, kinva vayfal badbad karnare vatle nahit.tumhi var namood kelela artha amhala thauk ahe.amhi asu navin jamanyache, navya valnache, pun titkech sanvedanashil ani bahirmukh ahot.
aso, ithe lihinyacha, ani mata pradarshanacha hetu hach "we can agree to disagree".
pun ithe tehi ghadat nahiye. If we jest eachother's argument of disagreement, we have no buisiness even to argue.
I agree with Milya.
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Asami
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 3:05 pm: |
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Shahana.. Aapalyala soyoskar vatel tevadhe quotes takayache ni bakiche ignore karayache ? Jar PuLanchya "Ek Gaandhi Topichya Pravas"cha ullekh kelya tar tyatle don ghasghasht pananche "Samanyancha Swatantrya Yudhhatala Kharicha Vaata" ha bhaag visrlaat ka ?
I agree with Milya And Shilpa too. Ek tar tumhi muddamhoon Amhi kaay sangtoy te kaanaad karayachaa praytna kartay kinva "Aapale tech Khare" mananaryanchya panthatale ahaat. Whatever.... I'm over and out.
And as Ajjuka has said joparyant tumhi sangat nahit ki tumhi kaay kelay deshasaathi Toparyant tumhalahi etarana kahihi bolayacha adhikaar nahi (the way u said ki etarana daad denyacha adhikaar nahi). Ani jar tumhi nehmichech me Aasha la donation dila ni Cry saathi kaam karto etc sangat asal tar tohi kharicha vaata ahey he lakshaat asu de.
Sorry for getting personal....
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Gidhad
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 3:40 pm: |
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shahana..ata wahana ghala ani ramram mhana..sagali janata petawalit tumhi..
ADMIN..jara pani ot re ya BB war..jaltoy kenwhacha
shahan padgaonkarachi kumpan kawita wachaliye ka??
shanyanche bud asate wikasanshil..
:-)
nasel tar wacha...
mag apan shahanyanchya shahn panawar sahan ghasat charcha karu..pan tumhala dad dyawi tevhadi thodi ahe.. ikadale sagale shant mhanwanare lok sudhha petawalet tumhi wa!!
shahyala naskar
tyachya budala namskar :-) (iti padgaonkar)
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Peshawa
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 3:50 pm: |
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ushakal hota hota...
atishay bhramk kalpanewar rachaleli bramak kawya ahe..shabdancha nach hya peksha tya kawyala kadichahi arth nahi..
mhanun shabdanchi stuti hech tya kawitechi khari dad ahe...
kalratra zali mashali petawa..sagale banel aw analele hatsusane ahe..kontahi widarak satya waigere hi kawita sangat nahi ase maze spasht mat ahe..hya kawila ajunahi janachi nas kalali nahi..tyala matrubhumi mhanje kay te umagalkele nahi..
hya pudhe jaun...petun kashala utha ani kay kamasathi??
uigach agichya dhagine mane jalane ha shuddha murkhapana ahe..
ek changali shabdik gufan mhanunach hi kawita yogya ahe..
desh(a)bhakat
peshawa
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Sandeepb
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 5:14 pm: |
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shahanyala shabdacha mar! Pure zhale re ata! Shahana kadhich gayab zhalay.
Pan peshawa is also mhanning right!
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Limboni
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 6:29 pm: |
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peshawe, mi tuzya matashi sahamat naahi. kavita ya wishayawar mazyapeksha jasti bolaNyacha tula adhikar aahe he mala manya aahe. paN ekada kavita mhatali ki kuthali kalpana bhramak & kuthali wastaw he tharawaNyacha prashnach yet naahi. mhaNaje tyawar ase matapradarshan karaNyacha tula adhikar naahi asa mi mhaNu ichhit naahi.:-) pan tyanimittane tula bolata karun ajun ek marathi kavita & rasagrahaN baddal 'gahan' charchasatra suru karatey asa mhanenas ka?
nehamich jangalatalya praNyana vethila dharun kadkadat rahaNyabarobarach aapali mate jara vegvegaLya nikashavar ghasun ghyayala barich mandaLi utsuk asatil.:-)
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Peshawa
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| | Friday, March 10, 2000 - 8:09 pm: |
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bai limboni
me charche babat atishay samanya ahe..
kawitela ashay nasto wishay nasato ani bhawanahi nasate..
tyamule kalpana bhramak ahe ticha wichar bhramak ahe..ani ha bhram kawi mhanunahi asatoch..karan asha bhramatach chiranjiw kawita janmate..arthat hya bolnyalahi kahi arth nahi..
khare arth kinwa rasgrahan asel tar te wachanryachya shailiwar ani tyachya drushtikonawar ahe..tyamule jase randila randi mhanayache..tasech asha kawitanna bhrama mhanayche..arthat tyatala arth ha wachanryachya manat jagato..
shabdana bhawanachi ani itar kuthalihi kasar na lawata ekhadya dhagatun honarya akarasarakhe te kagadawar pasarale ki kawita hote
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Ajjuka
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| | Sunday, March 12, 2000 - 10:56 pm: |
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peshwa, tuze mhanane patle. Ha shabdanacha khel aahe. ani tyamule ya kavitechya shabdik soundaryakade baghave, daad dyavi ani gappa basave hech khare.
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Vinya
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| | Monday, March 27, 2000 - 1:35 pm: |
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Asaoca ho ksao basao
ksao trI jagaayacao
kuzo trI kQaI trI
Asaayacao ... nasaayacao
Asaoca saÜsasaÜsata
hsaUna hasavaayacao
Asaoca hasahasata
hLUca ivavhLayacao
Asaaca rahNaar maI
ijata tu$nga Aapulaa
AXaaca baaLgaIna maI
sauTavayaasa EaunKlaa
Asaaca ha igaLayacaa
gaL\yaamaQaIla hundka
ksao basao tgaayacao
Qa$na QaIr pÜrka
AXaIca yaoqalaI dyaa
hvaot caacapayacaI
AXaIca jaIvanaasa(a
punha xamaa krayacaI
Asaaca Xvaasa tÜkDa
punha punha Qarayacaa
Asaaca janma ÔaTka
punha punha iXavaayacaa
Asaoca poTpoTUnaI
punha punha ivaJaayacao
hvyaa hvyaa xaNaasahI
nakÜ nakÜ mhNaayacao
Asaoca inama-nauYya maI
ijaqao itqao Asaayacao
manaat sauya- vaocaUnaI
janaat maavaLayacao
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ratra bhar gheoon pyala
me asaha jagato
thand ya suraitalee me
asave he magato.
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takuni bolu naka ho
dhakaluni lotu naka
maja ghari jaga na majala
mhanuni yethe rahato
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ima~hÜ ...
kivavaya- sauroXa BaTancaI AaNaKI ek gaja,la ...
Aata jagaayaacao Asao maaja,o iktI @XaNa raihlao
maaj,yaa QauLIcao XaovaTI yaoqao iktI kNa raihlao
to laÜk hÜto vaogaLo Gaa[t jao gaolao puQao
maI maa~ qaambauna pahtÜ maagao iktI jaNa raihlao
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sauroXa BaTaMcyaa kovha trI phaTo.. caI dÜna unrecorded kDvaI..
AjaunaI dulasa yaotÜ tÜ gaMQa maÜgaáyaacaa
gajara ksaa ÔulaaMcaa ivasa$na ra~ gaolaI
Aata kuXaIt naahI tI caMd`kÜr maaJaI
hlakoca kUsa maaJaI badlaUna ra~ gaolaI
kovha trI phaTo...
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sorry! there is some correction!
pihlaI AÜL maI cauikcaI ilaihlaI AahoÊ tI AXaI hvaI
AjaunaI saugaMQa yao dulasa maÜgaáyaacaa
gajara ksaa.....
sorry again!
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thanks mugdha!
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maugQaa
' Aataca AmaRtacaI barsaUna rat gaolaI... ' yaa gaItat KalaIla kDvaI Aahot...
]rlao jara jarasao gaganaat maMd taro
hlakoca kUsa maaJaI badlaUna ra~ gaolaI
AjaunaI saugaMQa yao dulasa maÜgaáyaacaa
gajara ksaa ÔulaaMcaa ivasa$na ra~ gaolaI
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namaskar ima~hÜ
maI navaIna Aaho ihtgaujavar
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rahulaÊ ihtgaujavar tuJao svaagat AsaÜ.
sauroXa BaTaMcaI AaNaKI ek kivata
AakaXa ]jaLlao hÜto
[tkcaM malaa jaatanaa sarNaavar kLlao hÜtoÊ
marNaanaM kolaI sauTkaÊ jagaNyaanao CLlao hÜto.
hI duinayaa paYaaNaaMcaI baÜlaUna badlalaI naahIÊ
maI bahr yaoqao XabdaMcaoÊ nausatoca ]QaLlao hÜto.
gaolaolyaa AayauYyaacaa maQaumaasa gaDo ivasaÉyaaÊ
pa}la kQaI vaaáyaacaoÊ maaGaarI vaLlao hÜto.
maI eokivalaI tovhahI tuja maaJaI hIca khaNaIÊ
maI naava tuJao tovhahIÊ caupcaap vagaLlao hÜto.
yaacaoca rDU Aalao kI jamalao na malaa rDNaohIÊ
maI rMga tuJyaa svaPnaaMcao AEaut imasaLlao hÜto.
nausatIca tuJyaa smarNaaMcaI ekaMtI irmaiJama JaalaIÊ
nausatoca tuJao udyaaXaI maI Baasa kLvalao hÜto.
Gar maaJao XaÜQaayaa maIÊ vaaáyaavar vaNavaNa kolaIÊ
jao dar Kulao idsalao toÊ AaQaIca inaKLlao hÜto.
maI ekTaca %yaa ra~I tovat hÜtÜÊ
maI ivaJalaÜ tovha saaro AakaXa ]jaLlao hÜto.
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sauroXa BaTaMcaI ek Ap`tIma kvaIta
payapIT
duÁKacyaa vaaTovar
gaava tuJao laagalao
qabaklao na paya jarI
)dya maa~ qaaMbalao
vaoXaIpaXaI ]dasa
hak tuJaI BaoTlaI
Ana maaJaI payapIT
DÜL\yaatUna saaMDlaI
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