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Ravysaraf
Thursday, May 16, 2002 - 6:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

gaPpaca caalalyaa Aahot mhNaUna saaMgatÜya...
ga`osa ihslaÜp college maQyao iXakvat Asat.... maaJaa batch laa (SSC1994) %yaaMcaa ek QaDa hÜta .... icamaNyaa ...


Ravysaraf
Thursday, May 16, 2002 - 7:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

naagapurcaaca kÜNaI Asaola trÊ Qarmapozocyaa BaajaIbaajaarat %yaaMnaa baGata yao[la.... BaoT maa~ kovaL naiXaba

Robeenhood
Thursday, May 16, 2002 - 2:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

icamaNyaa ha paz %yaaMcyaa caca-baola yaa lailat saMga`hatIla Aaho

Ashishchaskar
Saturday, May 18, 2002 - 8:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

robinhood,
ga`osacyaa kivatavar cacaa- krayalaa kÜNa AMga kaZUna GaotÜ AahoÆ
:-)


Robeenhood
Saturday, May 18, 2002 - 10:33 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maIca AMga kaZUna GaotÜ Aaho

Dr_ashutosh
Monday, May 20, 2002 - 6:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Hallo frds ,

Dagdh mulinche warati mi kharech ek lekh lihit ahe ! Ya kavitemadhye Grace yanchi kavi mhanun asaleli maximum strenghth and maximum weakness donhi disato . Grace yanchi shabd-kala Pu SHi regyansarakhich -- titakich samruddha , navin-junyacha sandha chapalakha jodanaree . pan regyanchya kavitetala thospana grace yachya kavitet kami vela disato .
Grace yancha bhav pradarshan mhanaje GA Kulkarni kavitet lihit asawa itka gahan-gooDh pan GA yanchya kathet adhalanare bhavanche vyamishrapana kwachitach disato !
Grace he kharokhar sayamak . chandobaddha li hinyat great mhanawet ase ahet .Mi magachya welela jara passionni he mhanala hota
But I really love his sense of the very internal rhythm which a poem should essentially carry .

Maza akshep ahe to ha : barech vela Grace shabdamage , chandamage , yamakamage jatana disatat - ani mag bhav kuthetari mage padalyasarakha watato ( Rajputra ani Darling ha sukhad apawad ) . arthat yatahi kahi serious nahi -- mala serious he watata hi atishay changale wachak dekhil tya shabd-mohinichya jalyat adakatat
( EG : Dadgh mulinche .... ya kavitet kiti sundar oli ahet - path karavyat asha ! FATAKA vrutta agadi yogy yatibhangasaha ! )
ani tya basis war fans hotat .

mala watata ki 3 types distata:
1) Shabd-kala pradhanyanne ani bhav duyyam --
Eg. Govindagraj , yashwant , Karandikar
2) Shabd-kala duyyam , bhav pramukh --
Eg. Arun Kolatkar , neeraja , anuradha potdar
3) Shabd-kala ani bhav donhi balanced --
Eg . Indira sant , Aruna dhere , , Kusumagraj

Grace ya tinhi types madhe adhe-madhe vastavya karat rahtat evadhech maze mhanane ahe !
Ani fans honyatadekhil kahi gair nahi pan aapalya heroche weak points mahit asalele bare !
Ityalam !



Dr_ashutosh
Monday, May 20, 2002 - 6:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ajun ek :

Lalit lekh lihinare Manik Godghate he gracewar mat karatat ase mala rahun rahun watate . apale mat ?

Rar
Monday, May 20, 2002 - 6:52 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

barech diwas mi "grace" baddal ithe vachat hote...
grace vachtana jasa aand milto..tasach aanand grace baddal vachtana hot aase..
tyamule kadhi lihavese vatle nahi..
kalach "sajanvela" aaikale...vichar chalu aahe...
Grace aaikatana vatte..pratyek "kavita" hi kontyatari "anubhavavar" based aahe..ani mhanunach grace samjun ghyyala tyanche "jeevan" samjayla have...



Rasikyash
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 12:55 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


Dr - tuJaa tÜ laoK pUNa- kQaI hÜNaar AahoÆ malaa vaacaayalaa AavaDola. [qao pÜYT krNaar Aahosa kaÆ jara %varIt krÊ tU Ôar qaÜpvaUna zovatÜsa ro²

Anyway ... tuJao Aa<aacao posting sauroK² maaJyaa mato Grace saahoba ho XabdaMkDo jaast laxa dotat AaiNa %yaaMcaa Baava XabdtUlanaonao kmaI pDtÜ. pNa to jao kahI Xabd inavaDtat to vaacaayalaa Ap`tIma vaaTtat. %yaaMcao lailat laoK maI kQaIca vaacalao naahIt AaiNa malaa to maaihtIpNa naahI. %yaaMcaI naavao jar za]k AsatIla tr saaMgatÜsa kaÆ maI doXaatUna maagavaayacaa p`ya%na krona. AsaÜ. kivatot Baava mah%vaacaa kI Xad\baaMd\vaaro yaoNaarI laya mah%vaacaI ho vaacakavar AvalaMbaUna Asato. tUlaa Baava jaast AavaDtÜ Asao vaaTto. (a ]laT ra^baInadaMnaa laya AavaDto Asao vaaTto. pNa maaJyaa vaacanaatIla kahI kivata AXyaahI Aahot kI %yaa BaavaspXa- AsatanaahI vaacatanaa ek laoK vaacatÜ Aaho Asao vaaTto. (a ]laT KaMDokraMcao ‘yayaatI’ vaacatanaa ek maÜzo kavya vaacatÜ Aaho Asao jaaNavato. %yaaMcyaa kadMbarItlaa p`%yaok ]tara ek kivataca vaaTto²

Rar - Grace vaacanao AaiNa Grace ba_la vaacanao malaahI AavaDto. tU jasao mhNatÜsa kI %yaaMcao jaIvana samajavaUna Gyaayalaa hvao tr tUlaa kahI maaihtI Asaola tr AamhalaahI saaMga² malaa %yaaMcyaa ivaYayaI ÔarXao maaihtI naahI. pNa kivata vaacatanaa kivacyaa personal life ba_la maaihtI Asaayalaa hvaI ha ivacaar kahI yaÜgya naahI. %yaaMcaI p`tIBaaXa>I sapÙ Asaola tr to barÜbar )dyaat ]trtIla²


Beti
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 3:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ashu, bakee Theek paN karandikar he windA asateel tar mAzA tyanchyA pahilyA wargAt sAmAweshAlA prakhar wirodh Ahe.

marAtThee kaweenpaikee tech tar ase Ahet ki sashakt bhAwarth he jyAnchyA kawiteche balsthAn Ahe... ithe mAyboleewar ghetA, kaNikA, itakech kAy tyAnchee bAl geete ghe... superb arthwhee kawitA Ahe tyAnchee... its sad ki itakya yugprawartak wichArAnA dnyAn peeTh miLoo naye....

he ithe kewaL reaction mhaNoon lihile Ahe. GracechyA bbchee jAgA aDawate ase wATAlyAs, please uDawoon TAkA admin!

Ashishchaskar
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 1:32 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ashutosh,
mala serious he watata hi atishay changale wachak dekhil tya shabd-mohinichya jalyat adakatat>>>
ho jara spYT kr. kÜNatIhI idXaa nasalaolao ho ek baojabaabadar vaa@ya Aaho. AsaÜ.

mauLat Asao Aaho kI varcaI jaI tulanaa kolaI Aahosa tI ApUNa- Aaho. Anaok AitXaya EaoYz kvaIMcaa %yaat ]llaoKhI naahI. ]dahrNaaqa-Ê baa.saI.maQao-krÊ Baa. ra. taMbaoÊ raAÜya ikiNakrÊ AartI p`BauÊ maMgaoXa paDgaavakrÊ vasaMt baapTÊXaaMta XaoLkoÊ koXavasaUtÊbaalakvaIÊ naa. QaÜ. mahanaÜr ..AaiNa Anaok.. Ajauna ilahayacaa kMTaLa Aalaa. yaaMcao tu vagaI-krNa krXaIla ka Æ tU jyaap`karo ivacaar krtÜ Aahosa to izk Aaho pNa jara jaast
database vaapr mhNajao kdicat tuJao svatÁcaoca d`uiYTkÜna badlatIla.

kvaIMcao tu kolaosa %yaap`karo maI hI vagaI-krNa krtÜ. baGa pTto ka.
1. Aa%mamagna kvaI ho kvaI svatÁcyaa jagaacao vaNa-na %yaaMcyaa saaih%yaat jaast krtat. svatÁcaI duÁKoÊ jaaNaIvaaÊ maana Apmaana ho %yaaMnaa p`maaNa Asatat. %yaamauLo saamaajaIk p`Xnaavar %yaaMcao saaih%ya AitXaya kmaI AaZLto.
ga`osa Ê AartI p`BaU ho %yaatlao.
2. kÜNatahI ivaYaya caalaNaaro kvaI
yaa kvaIMnaa kÜNatahI ivaYaya caalatÜ. vaOya>Ik sauK duÁKa pasaUna jaagatIk samasyaaMpya-Mt kahIhI. inasaga- vaNa-na kivata ilaihNaaro %yaatca yaotat.
kusaumaaga`jaÊ paDgaavakrÊ ivaMda ho yaatlao.

yaat ha barÜbar ikMvaa ha cauk Asao nasato.
kvaI Apaplyaa cavaI p`maaNao ilaihtat AaiNa vaacak Aapaplyaa cavaInao vaacatat.

ga`osa yaaMcyaa kivata p`amau#yaanao Aa%mamagna Asatat. dusaro Asao kIÊ yaa maaNasaacao vaacana p`caMD Aaho. mauLat AapNa kivata krtÜ mhNajao kaya krtÜÆ Aaplyaa AnauBavaMcao vaNa-na kahI ]pmaa dovaUna krtÜ. yaa ]pmaa kuzUna yaotat tr AapNa vaacalaolyaa Ê pihlaolyaa jagaatUna. jaovaQao tumacao vaacana kmaI tovaZo ]pmaaMcao iripToXana jaast hÜto. AaiNa AapNa kaya pahtÜ yaapoxaa to ksao phatÜ yaalaa jaast mah%va Aaho. %yaamauLo eKadI saMQyaakaL ga`osa nao kXaI pahIlaI Ê ho kÜNa saaMgaNaarÆ Aata ha d`uYTIkÜna ksaa yaotÜ tr Aaplyaalaa Aalaolyaa AnauBavaatUna. ]da. paya tuTlaa tr kaya hÜto ho tumhI klpU Xakta Ê pNa paya tuTlaolyaa maaNasaapoxaa jaast caaMgalao saaMgaU Xakta kaÆ ikMvaa paya tuTU XaktÜ ho tumhalaa jar maaihtIca nasaola tr tÜ laMgaDa maaNaUsa kaya saaMgatÜ ho tumhalaa kaya kLNaarÆ %yaacao duÁK yaa karNaamauLo tumhalaa
"dubaÜ-Qa "
hÜto ho laxaat Gao. %yaamauLo ga`osacaa risak mhNaUna ivacaar krtanaa %yaaMcao AayauYya laxat GaoNao AitXaya mah%vaacao Aaho. tumhI saimaxak mhNauna phat Asaala tr tumhalaa sagaLo maaÔ Aaho. karNa kÜNaalaa inavaDayacao AaiNa kÜNaalaa Takayacao ho XaovaTI risak zrvatÜ.




Ashishchaskar
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 2:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

yash,
what Rar says is absolutely correct. when poet is like Grace or Arati Prabhu, you should know through which conditions they have gone . It helps you to understand the poem at great extent. Because as I told in earlier post , if you do not know what is meant by "eye" you will certainly not be knowing what is "blindness". How will you appreciate the artical on blindness?

Asami
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 2:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Dr tumhi mandaleli Grace ani GA hyanchi analogy atishay achuk vatate pan tumchi vargvaari ajibaat patat naahi. Ashish mhanto tyapramane tumhi tumcha sample space farach kami thevlaay tyamule ashi vargvaari karane farse achuk hoou shakat naahi.
Windanbabat maze betila purna anumodan aahe. mazya mate bhaav ha atishay saapeksh asa vichaar aahe ani tyamule "amuk kavita atishay bhavdarshi aahe" asha prakarche vidhaan he vaiykitik pratalawarach ubhi rahu shaktaat.
e.g. Gracechi aghori vidyevaril khalil kavita baghaa.


Chaar Mantrik jamle
Gheti aghorichi aan
Kod futalya baila
Jasa vate deh ghaan

Ghaar kosloon meli
Uthe gavamaadhe danga
Kod futalya baicha
Zala rakhelahi nanga

Tari doghana jojvi
Khinna aghorichi maaya
Bai randvi hotana
Jashi pasarate kaaya...

Hya kavitemadhe beebhtsva bhaav poornapane utarala aahe asa mala vatate. Arthaat hyamagache mukhya karan mhanje Narayan Dharap, Matkari, Shahikant konkar, Rajnakar etc lokanchya asha prakarachi pustake vachun aghori vidyebaddal zaleli mahiti. Shakta panthababat kelela abhyaas pan hyache ek karan aahe.
Pan jar ekhadya vyaktine asa likahan kadhi vachalech nasel tar tya kavitebaddal keelas vatanyavachun aankhi tyala kahi vatnaar naahi. Bheebhatsa rasacha ha vijay mhatla tari tyamagacha bhaav na umajalyamule kavitecha swaad ghene asha vyaktila shakya honaar naahi.

my 2 cents worth. ....

Rar
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 6:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

rasikyash
kavita "vachtana" kavichya personal life baddal mahiti nasli tari chalte...aapan fakta kavita vachat aasto..shabdancha aaswad ghet aasto....
pun kavita "samjun" ghyychya aastil tar..ani vishesh karun tya personal life shi nigdit aastil tar ...kavita samjun ghyayala hi mahiti aasavi aase maze mhanne aahe
ani grace chya babtit..kahina tyanchya kavita mhanje "shabdachal" vatat aastil tar tyache karan kavitemagchi "jeevankahani" mahit naste hech aasave...
kay mat aahe tumche?


Dr_ashutosh
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 7:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ashish ,

Classification system written in my post is one of the many systems with which a poem / poet can be classified .
What classification has been given by you is right but that doesnt mean that mine stands wrong !
May be somebody would like to put some poet in some other catagoury but that does not alter the criterias for the same
EG . Vinda Acc to beti and asami -- should get the seat in third section ( that is balanced ... one )
So , there may lie difference . Well , U have offered a list of poets which I know -- know well - know in depth ! And u can try to put each of them in some catagoury .

Offcourse -- there comes a trouble when u see that some poet may be on the borderline of 2 types or some poet has written poems in his early life which can be put in say Type I
and then he has written poems later in his life which are superior and hence can be put in section III

Finally , there exists possibility -- which I never deny at least when we are talking about arts and aesthetics -- the possibility that the poet / poem CAN NOT be classified AS SUCH !!
So , then classification system fails ! I dont mind if classification system offered above in my post fails bCoz even if it fails it provides a very different angle for the reader to look at a poem . The angle may be acute / Obtuse / straight . It may be bad / good -- but it gives a stand , a base to go ahead and interact with a poem and poetry

BEJABABDAR WAKYAVISHAYI -- again no misunderstandings please -- the sentence was not so casual as u might feel but the very expalination for the same cant be given here -- in such a short space .

Dr_ashutosh
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 7:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Asami ,

I agree with u that a poem reflects the wisdom of poet and one of the most vital element of wisdom is his knowledge !!

pan apan jevha asha kavinbaddal bolato ( mhanaje grace etc ) tevha te tyanchya limitations sakat AFAT asalyachach janavata
And the very reason is the intensive study which they do , the passion with which they read others literature and so on

GOOD POINT STATED !

Dr_ashutosh
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 7:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

RAR ,

Tuza mudda vegala ani vicharat ghenyasarakha ahe -- Tyachi jivankahani mahita nasalyani ...... kavita durbodh banate etc ....


GRACE -- sodwa ho ata tumhich mala -- far doka chalawawa lagnar disatay ata ! : )

Paragkan
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 7:54 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kiva / kvaiya~IMnaa AXaI laobalaM laavaayacaaÊ %yaaMcaI vaga-vaarI krNyaacaa A+ahasa kaÆ

Ravysaraf
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 7:58 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Doctor Ê ivaXlaoYaNa ksalaM krtaya.... iXaxaa kivata post krNyaacaI hÜtI

Rar
Tuesday, May 21, 2002 - 8:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

aare..grace chya kavitanchi aathvan mage padayla nako..
mala mahit nahi hi kavita purvi koni post keli aahe ka nahi...pun grace yanchi hi "prem kavita"

saÜnyaacyaa maÜhra

gaolao ]kÉna Gar
naahI iBaMtInaa AÜlaavaa
Bar AÜMjaLI caaMdNao
kÉ pacaucaa igalaavaa

AaNa ilambaÜiNa saavalyaa
naahI AaZ\yaalaa CPpr
valacaiNacyaa QaaraMnaa
laa} cand`aica Jaalar

paya­AÜZ\%yaa vaaLuica
AaNa tovhacaI TÜplaI
kiQa KoLola AaMgaNaI
tuJaI maaJaIca saavalaIÆ

gaolao }kÉna Gar
jaa} Qau@yaat maaGaara
kQaI puÉna zovalyaa
AaNau saÜnyaacyaa maÜhra


Rasikyash
Wednesday, May 22, 2002 - 12:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


RAR - kivata vaacatanaaÊ XabdaMcyaa AasvaadapoxaahI jaast AanaMd toMvha hÜtÜ jaoMvha tI kivata pUNa-pNao kLto. pNa eKadI kivataÊ jar kuNaI Aaplyaa vaOya>Ik jaIvanaaXaI Qa$na kolaolaI Asaola AaiNa %yaa vya>Icao vaOya>Ik jaIvana vaacakalaa maaihtI nasaola ikMvaa %yaa vya>Iba_la jar maaihtIca ]plabQa nasaola tr vaacakanao kaya kravaoÆ ]da. ga`osaca Gyaa. %yaaMcao vaOya>Ik jaIvana tumacyaa pOkI iktI jaNaaMnaa zavaUk AahoÆ %yaaMcyaa kivata %yaaMcyaa jaIvanaaXaI inagaDIt Aahot Asao mhNatat maga %yaaMcao jaIvana samajaa}na Gyaayalaa kahI saaih%ya Aaho kaÆ ha Jaalaa ga`osacaa ivaYaya pNa [tr AjaUna kvaI jyaaMcyaa kivata %yaaMcyaa vaOya>It jaIvanaaXaI inagaDIt Aahot %yaaMnaa jar %yaaMcyaa vaOya>It jaIvanaaivaYaayaI ivacaarlao Asata to tumhalaa saaMgaU XaktIla kaÆ maagao [qao eka vya>InaI ‘kvaca’ naavaacaI ek kivata kolaI hÜtI. vya>I Ôar p`isawa Aaho. naava saaMgat naahI. malaa Aqa- Ôar ]majalaa navhta mhNaUna maI Aqa- ivacaarlaa Asata AmaUk AmaUk ka ilaihlao ho ivacaa$ nakÜsa to maaJao vaOya>Ik Aaho Asao saaMgaUna Aqa- pUNa- kolaa. ho saaMgaayacao ta%pya- kLlao Asaolaca²


Beti
Wednesday, May 22, 2002 - 2:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

yash,

kawitA samajAyalA kaweeche waiyaktik jeewan samjAyalAch hawe ase nAsate re... kawitechA sandarbh caleidoscopesArkhA asato--- pratyek wAchakAchya konAtoon wegaLee nakshee disate tichee....kuThalyAhe konAtoon nakshee disatech..ApaN ApalyAla kAy kaLate te pahAwe. apalyA anubhawatoon kawitA wAchAwee. fAr tar, 'asech na?' ase wichArAwe.... waiyaktik AyuShya chawhAtyAwar mAnDAyalA kuNalAch AwaDat nAhee sahasA... tyAbaddal wichAroohee naye.

tee wyaktee waiyaktik anubhaw tumachyAsamor kawitetoon mAndate... arthbodh kareet basaNe tiche kAm nasate re.. kAhee weLA lok suruwAt karoon dyAyalA chAngulpaNAne madat karatAthee--mag mArg apaN shodhAwa--sArakha dependence asoo naye-- AtA hech bagh, tulA arth kaLalA nAhee mhaNoon grace kA samjawoon sAngaNar Ahet? mag diwangat kawee lokAche kAy karAyache?

agadee rahAwale nAhee mhAnoon he lihile.. rAg mAnoo nakos.



Rasikyash
Wednesday, May 22, 2002 - 2:46 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

waiyaktik AyuShya chawhAtyAwar mAnDAyalA kuNalAch AwaDat nAhee sahasA... tyAbaddal wichAroohee naye. >> ho malahee hech mhaNayache aahe. ajaaN paNe mee poorvee ase bedhaDakapaNe prashna karayacho paN aataa tashya chookaa hot naaheet. (he malaa mazya eka priy maybolikar mitrakaDoonach shikayala miLalele aahe.) 'RAR' aaNi 'Ashishchaskar' hyanna kaweeche personal life jaNun ghetale pahije ase mhaNayache aahe. maze mhaNane itakech kee te jar shakya asel tar chhanach aaNi ichchhook vachak te jaNun ghyayacha prayatna karateelahee paN nasel ekhadhyachee tayaree swata:baddal sangat basanyachee mag ashyaweLee tyanchya kawita hya manat gooDh'ch rahatat? kahinna tya kaLatat karaN tyanche anubhaw tya kawiteshee parallel asatat mhaNoon! Aso.. posting baddal man:poorvak aabhar!


Rar
Wednesday, May 22, 2002 - 5:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

malahi tech mhnayche aahe...kavita vachtana shabdancha aaswad atishya mahatvaca...
pun samjun ghetana mahit aasel tar uttam..ase maze mat aahe...
ani mala mhanayche hote..ki jeevan mahit aasnaypeksha..kontya "vichratun" ti kavita janmala aali he matwache..ani kahi kavinchya babtit tyanchy ajeevancha/ tyanchya bhalya-burya anubhvancha tyanchya jeevanavar ani likhnavar thasa umatlela disto...
tuze mhanne mala patte..pun aasahi vichar kela tar chuk aahe ka?
pun maja yet aahe discussion la...

Saurabh
Wednesday, May 22, 2002 - 5:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ga`osa (aMcyaa kavyaXaOlaI ba_la baÜlatanaa ga`osa (aMnaI svatÁca svatÁcyaa kivatoba_la kolaolyaa Aa%maicaMtnaba_la ³saajaNavaoLa cyaa pUvaa-Qaa-cyaa saurvaatIlaa Aaho to´ [qalyaa laÜkaMcao kaya mhNaNaM AahoÆ ‘XabdmayaIÊ XabdvaolhaL AaiNa Aqa-kahUr’ kivata² maI tr (a doKIla f> XabdaMvarca KUYa Aaho.

Rar
Wednesday, May 22, 2002 - 7:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

are...mala hi te far aavdate...
awat:chya kavitanbaddal aase bolne far aavghad aahe...
aapli kavita kontya jatichi aahe..ticha pind kay he kavine swat:ch sangitale aahe..he oolkhane far aavghad aasave ase mala vatte...
te aasehi kahi mhnatat na..."mazi kavita eka betasarkhi aahe...betavar lok ektar sutti ghalvayla yetat kiva udhnlelya samudrapasun swat:che rakshan karnyasathi...ithun parat jatana hodi milelach yachi mi shaswati det nahi...swat:lach hodi banun jave lagte"...
mala shabda nakki aathvat nahit..pun aashay aasch aasava

Paragkan
Thursday, May 23, 2002 - 2:45 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Beti: 'saajaNveLaa' miLaali kaa ga? :-)

saurabh: 'te' shabd kharach aawaDale!

Robeenhood
Friday, May 24, 2002 - 4:43 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

dovanaagarI ilahaÊ
dovanaagarI vaacaa Ê
dovanaagarI iXaka....


Ravysaraf
Saturday, May 25, 2002 - 10:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

risakÊ dusaáyaa BB var marazIsaazI vaad CoDlaa Aahosa..... AaiNa [qao tuca imaMiglaXa vaaprtÜyasa ... maI yaa page varIla Ô> 3 - 4 postings vaacalyaa imaMiglaXamauLo....

Rasikyash
Saturday, May 25, 2002 - 11:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ravyasarag - mee miglish kaa lihita mhaNoon vaad mandalela naahee. aani ekhad don lahan sahan messages miglish madhe lihayala harkat nahee asehee mhantalele aahe. ja, parat jauun vach to BB.

Robeenhood
Saturday, May 25, 2002 - 1:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

iXavyaasauwa Va pNa dovanaagarItca...

Girishmusic
Monday, June 03, 2002 - 9:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

are baap re. ithe tar sab kuchh grace ahe. surwatilach "dharampetheteel Bhajibajar" wachla, pan mala tyancha postal address hava ahe mitranno..

Ravysaraf
Thursday, June 06, 2002 - 5:55 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Robinhoood,

tuJaa naaiXakcaa phone number Asaola tr post kr ... maI bahutok itqao yaošna

Dr_ashutosh
Thursday, June 06, 2002 - 12:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Finally , punishment swikarat ahe --

GanaanaI vaaklaolaa maI
ÔulaanaI Jaaklaolaa maI
jaraXaa mand spXaa-nao
manaalaa kmp ka sauTtÜ Æ

kQaIcao $p iBajalaolao
tmaatIla gaar vanaraš
nadIcyaa XauBa` QaaranaI
nadIcaa ]r ka ÔuTtÜ Æ

manaatuna vaahNaarI hI
yaugaancaI AanQaLI gaaNaI
jarasao KÜla baGatanaa
gaL\yaatUna Xabd ka ÔuTtÜ Æ


Dr_ashutosh
Thursday, June 06, 2002 - 12:34 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

This poem is about creation , creativity and the very exitment as well as frustration which is so inevitable in any synergistic process .
I like this poem as the content and the form goes without criss-crossing each other . The poem is as good as T. S. Eliot's Love Song of Pual Alfred .




 
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