Mahavirk
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| | Wednesday, November 04, 1998 - 1:05 pm: | 
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namaskar mandaLi,
pudhil kavita koni lihili he jar konala mahit asel, tar krupaya sanga.
thabathabali - othambuni khali aali
jaladali - maj disali saayankaLi
rangahi te - nacha yeti warnaayaala
sundarata - maj bhulavi chitta
wyomakoTi - jaladaanchi zali daaTi
krushna kuni - kajaLi chya shikhara waani
niL kuni - neelamanyachaya kaantihuni
gokarni - misra jamdhaLe tase kuni
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Thanks in advance,
mahavir
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Rangy
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| | Wednesday, November 04, 1998 - 4:41 pm: |
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Mahavir,
Hi kavita Baalkavi chi ahe
amhala 9th standardala marathichya pustakat hoti
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Rangy
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| | Wednesday, November 04, 1998 - 4:46 pm: |
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Mahavir,
Thanks to my "vague memory" I now think it is by either keshavsut or Baalkavi.
Sorry for the confusion. I think I may not be the right person to help u in this. But anyone who has passed their SSC from 1985-1987 will know the answer
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Mahavirk
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| | Thursday, November 05, 1998 - 12:48 pm: |
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Rangy,
Thanks for the reply. we had this kavita for 6th (I am 1990 SSC). and it is my favourate poem since then. pun, mi kavi/kavita-sangrah che nav wisaralo. (but, definately not keshavsut)
Anyone else can help me???
mahavir.
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Kylaswasi
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| | Friday, November 06, 1998 - 12:22 am: |
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mi Baalakawi - bolatase swargaatuni,
lihili ti - kawitaa mi bhoowarati.
deoo nakaa - Keshawsutaa athawaa dusaryaa konaa
"credita" hyaa - sundara kawiteche maajhyaa!
isawi sana hotaa - ekonisashe baaraa
an tithi akaraa - nowhembar mahinyaachi.
suchali ti - kawitaa sahajasahaja basalyaa
hoto mi - baghata jemwhaa khidakituni baaheri.
nawhataa udyoga - tyaaweli dusaraa
ghetali haati jharani - jhani lihili kawitaa!
aawadali kaa - maajhi kawitaa tumhaalaa?
jhaalo mi - dhanya ahaa, majjeta tumhi rahaa!
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Ajay
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| | Friday, November 06, 1998 - 12:54 am: |
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Kylaswasi,
wahwa ! Kamal kelit . Ajun Liha. Lihate va.
Ajay Gallewale
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Kylaswasi
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| | Friday, November 06, 1998 - 2:42 am: |
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Madhu maagashi maajhya sakhyaa, paree
madhughatachi rikaame padati gharee.
Pan dein tujalaa strawberry jelly
majhya baaykone jee aaj ghari kelee.
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Shonoo
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| | Friday, November 06, 1998 - 8:26 pm: |
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Any body from PTV here ? Anybody who had the incredible fortune of Sir teaching this kavita in the 10th grade ? Off Course Sahasrabuddhe Sir, who else ?
I still get goose bumps when I recollect his class, and my eyes mist over.....
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Fukatya
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| | Thursday, November 26, 1998 - 3:16 pm: |
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nij nij tanhya baLa
laagu de re tuza doLa
hi kavita kuNala purna yete ka?
fukatya
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Fukatya
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| | Tuesday, December 01, 1998 - 1:53 pm: |
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are he kAy? kuNAlAch mAhit nAhi hi kavitA???
junta, jara Doke khAjawA an paTkan mala hya kavitechyA woLi sA.ngA.
fukatya
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sameekshaa,
hi kavita kunkade asel tar plese mala pathwa,
maza e-mail id samiksha_786@yahoo.co.in
ghaal ghaal pinga waraa mazya parasaat
maherchya suvasachi kar barsaat
sukhi aahe lek saang aaeechya kanaat
aaee bhau veena man khantawat
me tumchi khup aabhaari rahil.
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Maj (Maj)
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| | Thursday, April 26, 2001 - 5:23 pm: |
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sameeksha, tumche swagat aso....
aata sagalya vibhagaanna bhet dewoon sameeksha karaa... ;-)
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KalaIla BaavagaItacaa Aqa- kuNaalaa maaiht Aaho kaÆÆ malaa tr Jaoplaa naahI
samacyaa XauBa` kL\yaa
]malavaUna lavato
kosaatca ÔulalaolaI
ja payaaXaI pDto
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maitreyee...
mi lavlela arth asa aahe...
devapashi (bahutek divelagnichya veli)samayi lavoon (shubhra kalya=jyoti) devala namaskar karte aani 'muddam' ashi fula vahnya agodarach kesaat malaleli fula (devachya)payashi padtat.
mhanje manapasoon kahi arpan karnyachya (changlya bhaavaala) ichhela ithe kashi anamik jod milali te kavyatoon far sundar vyakt kelay.
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kinva...aso. sagla ekdam nako.kadachit boar hosheel.
pudhchyaveli.
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Dinesh,
Ekdam chhan asa artha dila aahes. Pan mala vaTat, "shubra Kalya" mhanaje "jyoti" nasun samaiichya "VATA" ahet. Kapasachya korya vatannaa shubrapana aalaa aahe. Baki urlela arth yogya dila aahes.
Aata chal lavkar dusara arth pan lihun taak. Pan vidamban nako re karus.
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mala waTate tee shrungar-kawita ahe - arthat pooja--samarpaN sagaLe manaNyawar ahe. tyamule wegalya arthee Dineshcha mhaNaNe barobar asel.
Dinesh, too jee sahajata tuzya rasagrahaNat adhorekhit kelees tee nawhatee yapoorwee mazya dhyanat alee.
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ek kavita lihitey ethe, farach dhamal ahe, pan konachi te mahit nahiye...
"Aamaca baoT naiXabaca KÜT"
Aamaca baoT naiXabaca KÜTÊ sada sava-da AaDva yaot...
varatIcyaa maagauna GaÜD tsaca kaihsa naohmaI GaDt..
yaa Aamacyaa gaalaavarit roKila Aaho ek sma`uitÊ
gaihro pNaa itcyaamaQalaa kovaL ]rlaa Aaja hatI.
p`%yaok maulagaIÊ p`%yaok baaÊ malaa baGauna GayaaL hÜÊ
"Ae[yaa ik<aI gaÜD" mhNauna sarL sarL mauka Gao...
saÜsata saÜsata sauKd halaÊ
laala laala vhayacao gaala...
Aaja vaaTt hjaar vaoLaÊ
%yaa vaoLI ka hÜtÜ baaLÆ
sagaLIkDo ho Asaca GaDtÊ
Bala%yaa vaoLI Balatca GaDt...
kÜlaojaat pÜirMvar laa[naI maarlyaa BaaraBarÊ
ekhI paKÉ gaavala naahIÊ
sagaLI ]Daila varcyaa var.
ek icamaNaI maÜzI huXaarÊ
iKXaavartI Aamacyaa ]dar...
hI trI krIla lagna...
AaXaa hÜtI manaat.
"lagna krXaIla maaJyaaXaIÆ"
p`XNa kolaa eko idvaXaI...
hsauna mhNaalaI 'very sorry...'
zrla Aaho dusaáyaaXaI...
naXaIba Aamaca Asa KÜTÊ
dusaáyaacaca jamauna jaat...
varaitcyaa maagauna GaÜDÊ
lagaMDt lagaMDt Aamaca yaot.
jaunyaa maOi~NaI rs%yaavarÊ
Aata BaoTtat varcyaavar...
"kaya krtatÆ" mhNauna ivacaartatÂ
"kuzo Aaho tumaca GarÆ"...
Aata kXaalaa Gar darÆ
tÜnD dabauna maukamaar...
GaramaQao AaNauna zovalaayaÊ
AamhIca ek hvaaladar.
Aamacaa hvaaladar ekdma garmaÊ
%yaacyaapuZo AamhI narma...
prs~I hI maatosamaana
eokuna eokunaÊ Kcaalaa dma.
naiXabaacaa ha Asaa KoLÊ
ksaa jamaavaa saagaaM maoLÆ
lagnaaAaQaIcao idvasa AazvatÊ
Garabaahorca kaZtÜ vaoL...
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good one mugdha
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Canaca Aaho kvaIta ... pNa kÜNaacaI Aaho ho kLu Xakola ka ?
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kunachi ahe mahit asate tar ithe kashala lihili asati? :)
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tU dUrdoXaI Asatasa
tr samajaU Xaklao Asato
pavasaacaM AsaM AvaoLI yaoNaM
eona bahracaa ?tU AsataMnaa
panagaL kXaI samajaavaUna Gao}
kivata saMga`h : saMdBa-
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sahi jayashree !! mast kavita aahe.
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Saurabh
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| | Monday, April 15, 2002 - 4:40 pm: |
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ja_Wadekar, by any chance AasaavarI kakDo (aMcaI tr naahI naa hI kivata Æ
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Monalip
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| | Thursday, May 02, 2002 - 7:08 am: |
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Mugdha Konachi ga hi kavita?
Khupach sundar aahe......
Monali
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monali : thanx
ag, konachi aahe maahit asati tar yaa sadarat kashala lihili asati ? 
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Milindaa
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| | Thursday, May 02, 2002 - 8:47 am: |
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hI.. hI.. hI.. itlaa jar ka maahIt AsatM tr itnaM [qao kXaalaa TaklaI AsatI tI kivata Æ
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Mugdharani : mast aahe kawita! aavaDalee. kuNya prem-virane lihilee dev jane!
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haa premvir mumbaicha asava bahuda.
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itnaI saaMjaa saKo imaLlyaa (a gaItacyaa pihlyaa kDvyaacaa Aqa- kuNaalaa maaihtI Aaho kaÆ
knakgaÜla ha maircaImaalaI jaÜDI jaÜ sauyaXaaÊ
caËvaala ho piva~ yao jaI XaaMt gaaBaIr inaXaaÊ
i~laÜk gaamaI maaÉtÊ tOXaa inama-L dahI idXaaÊ
saaxaI eosao Amar kÉnaI ho tva kr kir QarIlaa ||
gaItkar - Baa. ra. taMbao
kaya hÜtÜ (a AÜLIMcaa Aqa-Æ
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Adt
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| | Thursday, May 09, 2002 - 12:18 pm: |
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malaa vaaTtM yaacaa Aqa- Asaa Asaavaa :
yaXadayaI sauya- ³knakgaÜla´Ê XaaMt gaMBaIr ra~ ³inaXaa´Ê sava-gamanaI vaara ³maÉt´ AaiNa inama-L dha
idXaa yaaMcyaa Amar saaixanao tuJaa hat hatI Qarlaa Aaho ..
caËvaala ha Xabd kLlaa naahI.. ka ha Xabd caËvaak Asaa paihjaoÆ
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Adt : Thx! kadachit kahise barobar asel paN pratyek oLeencha arth mala hawa hota.
aaNi te chakrawal aahe, chakrawak navhe. marut mhaNaje vara ka? mala navhate mahit.
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