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Toparyant ithe apaN apalyala mahit asalelya alanakar, vruttanchi mahiti, udaharaN, vaishiste lihu yaa.
mala mahit asalela aaNi aawaDaNara alankar mhaNaje
anupras alankar. Yaat aksharanchya punurukti mule vegaLicha laya jaNavate.
1. gaDad niLe gaDad niLe
jalad bharuni aale
sheetal tanu chapal charaNa
anilgaN nighale
2. vanshi naad naTi tila khaTitaTi
khovoni poTipaTi
kakshe waam puTi swashrungnikaTi
vetaTi hi gomaTi
jevi neertaTi tarutaLavaTi
shree sham dehi uTi
( ya oLibaddal mi shashank ahe, please help)
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Anu, udaharaney chanach. pan anuprasavarach kay thamblis? tula je kahi aathavte te lihit raha pahu...
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Aa%ISayaao@tI AlaMkaracao ]dahrNa :
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P`aya%nao vaaLucao kNa rgaDIta tolahI gaLo
tRYaata-caI tRYNaa maRgajaL ipvaunaIyaa ivatLo
saSaacaohI laaQao iSaMga ivapnaI ifrta prI
mauKa-cao )dya Qarvaonaa xaNaBarI ||
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anuprasache ajun ek udaaharaN:
devi dayaawatii dawadisii daasaachi du:kh dardashaa duur
paapaate paLawitase param pawitre tuzaa paya:puur
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alankarache mukhyata: don prakar ahet. shabdaalankaar ani arthalankaar. anupraas, yamak he shabdalankar ahet.
yamak tase apalya sagalyanchya olakhiche. agadi 'antakshari : shighra kavinchi' madhalya kawitet hi yamak nakki juLawalele asate. pandit kavinni (moropant, vaman pandit vagaire) tyala vegalyach unchiwar neun thewale.
he udaharaN paha.
anal samihit saadhi raayaa waaraa mahiwaraa kaamaa
analas mii hii tasaa dhiraa yaawaa raam hi waraakaa maa
arth ahe:
jasa agnichya sahyala wara dhaun yeto, tasach mi (krushna) tuzya madatila yein, (bal) ram hi yeil. mag bichari laxmi (maa) ka mage rahil bare.
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anu , anilbhai shubha : chalu theva . tumchya mule shalet shiklela sagla brush up hotay .
mala hyawarun ek gammat athavli
shalet navin navin alankar shiktanna upama ani rupak hyat farak karnyat kadhi kadhi gondhal vaycha .
usually amchya bai vargat tharavik 3-4 janannach prashna vicharaychya . mag adhichyani upama mhanun uttar dile ani tyala bainni nakararthi man halavli ki me mothya tavat " rupak" mhanun uttar det ase :o)
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HH, khare ahe. upama, utpreksha ani rupak yat itaka thoda farak ahe ki gindhaL uDane agadi sahaj shakya ahe.
mala waTate, jevha samya dakhawatana sam, sarakha ashi shabdarachana asate tevha to upama alankar asato, jase:
tuzyaa kaantisam raktapataakaa purva dishe zalakati
utpreksha alankarat janu, pari ashi shabda rachna aDhaLate. udaa:
he chincheche zaaD dise maj chinar vrukshapari
rupak alankarat upamaan ani upameya he ekach ahet ase varnan kelele asate.
pikalii gawate goTyaa.naaDun
hirawaLunii baghatii Dokaawun
maraaThamoLyaa taruN kumaarii
lajati ki laDiwaLe
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aani amachya dahavichya syllabus la tar arthach navhata.
vruttanmadhe matra-vrutte aaNi gaN-vrutte (bahutek barobar asava shabd) asataat.
ni amhala fakt mandarmala he 1 ch matrvrutt hote.
tyamule matrvrutt oLkha mhatle ki mandarmala tharalele.
olkhayachi bhanagadach naahi.
actully mazya dada-chya sylaabus madhe bharpur matra-vrutte hoti ani mala te shikayala avadayache suddha. tyamule mi agodarach ti shikalo hoto.
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shubha : thanx a lot, mala agadi ashich mahiti ha BB ughaDala tevaa apekshit hoti.
Tu Looking for chya BB madhe itkyatacha aNakhi eka vruttacha ullekha kela ahe.
shardulvikridit vrutta chi vaishite konati ahe? Mala fakt chaalcha mahit ahe, kekalvali :
dayabda vaLashil tu pari ... chataka sevaka
uNe kimpi bhavika ubagashil tu dev ka
ananyagatika jana nirakhachi mopdrava
tuze chi karuNarva man dhari umop.. va
help ..shabda aksharasha aThavale tasech type kele ahe...
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Anu,
mala waTate kekawali hi arya vruttat ahe. arya he matra vrutta nahi.
shardulavikriDit vrutta mhanaje apali mangalashTake. mala tyache lakshaNageet aThawate:
aahe vrutta vishaal tyaas mhaNatii shardulavikridit
maa saa jaa ta ta taa ga yeti gaN he padaas ki joDiit
ekoNis pahaa gaNunii charaNii yetat hi akshare
teja:punja nabhaa.ngaNii pasaralii ratnae pahaa nakshare
ani he vrutta waparun keleli prasiddha kawita mhanaje acharya atre yanchi 'aajiche ghaDyaaL' !
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rushabha,anudon
jya pramane wruttancha abhays zala he..tya pramane jyala mukt chand mhanata tya chandatitl kawitanchya rachane wishayi..kahi wibhagani ahe ka??
asalyas tya wishayiche sandrbha deu shakashil kay...
ani ho marathi/sanskruk chand ani wrutte hyanchya sandarbhatil pustakanwishayi lihiles tar albhaylabha!!
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Jay,
marathitil sarva akshar-gaN wrutte sanskrut madhun jashichya tashi aleli ahet (tatsam prakaratil). chand vrutte matra (arya, owi) assal marathi.
marathi kawitetala pahili bandachi tutari keshav sutanchi. pan yat fakt vishayache swatantrya ghetale gele, rachaneche nahi. ya kaLatil kawitahi vruttanchya bandhanat rahilya, tyamule tyat ek prakarachi geyata angabhut ahe.
mukta chhand mhanajech je chhandanpasun mukta ahe, jyala rachaneche bandhan nahi. ha badal agadi alikadacha. Grace, Anil bahuda yache pratham puraskarte asawet.
mi marathicha taulanik abhyas kelela nahi, tyamuLe azi mahiti apuri asaNyachi daaT shakyata ahe. kuNala mahit asel tar liha.
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mala athavnari kahi (matra?)vruttanchi ardhavat udhaharne. kunala purna mahitiye?
navavadhu:
navavadhu priya mi bavarte
lajate, pudhe sarate, mage firate ||dru||
kaLe mala tu praN sakha jari
kale tuch aadhar sukha jari
mana javaL yavaya gangarte
navavadhu priya mi bavarte...
mandarmala:
saatat karit mandarmala,
guru ek tyachyahi anti vase
mandakranta:
mandakranta saras kavita kalidasi vidasi
????
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mandakranta he akshar-gaN vrutta ahe. pratyek oLit 17 akshare ani gaN ahet "ma bha na ja ra ga ga". tya wruttache ek maedar udaharaN aThawate:
chhoTyaa moThyaa chhalak kumati bolatii duShTa waachaa
bobhaaTaa ha ajawarii jagii chaalato sasawaa.nchaa
aishaa khoTyaa viparit mishe tuu na chittaa viTaaLii
ekyaa haate kadhitarii mulii waajate kaay TaaLii.
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Mandakranta mhanati tijala vrutta he manda chale
amhi he vrutaa ase lakshat thevaycho
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bhujangaprayaat he sagalyat sope vrutta. pratyek olit 12 akshare ani gaN ahet "ya ya ya ya". lakshaN geet purna athawat nahi, pan sadharaN ase
---- bhuja.ngaprayaat
kramaanech yetii ya chaarii jayaat
padi jyaachiyaa akshare yetii baaraa
ramaanaayakaa du:kh maaze niwaaraa
bahuda manachya shlokanche vrutta hi hech ahe.
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rushabha...ek suchana ahe!!
tu lihile ahes "ya" char yeti he athwate pan jar "ya" mhanaje kay ma mhanje kay "ja" mhanje kay he regha ani kans lihun adhi lihiles tar samjayala sope jail shiway jenwha wrutteche udahar deshil tenwha jar tyachi udaharana dakhal wibhagani hya ganat karashil tar mag kalayalahi sope jail!!
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he shivaji fonts vaprun lihita yeyil ka.
mhanaje samajayla bare jail (jayeel).
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prayatna karate
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RShubha, shardulvikridit madhe 1 correction:
aahe vrutta vishaal tyaas mhaNatii shardulavikridit
maa saa jaa sa ta taa ga yeti gaN he padaas ki joDiit
ekoNis pahaa gaNunii charaNii yetat hi akshare
teja:punja nabhaa.ngaNii pasaralii ratnae pahaa nakshare
Peshava, he ase aahe:
p`%yaok Axar ho laGau ikMvaa dIGa- Asao ivaBaagalao jaato
AaiNa %yaap`maaNao %yaaMcao 3 AxaraMcao gaT kolao jaatat.
Aaplyaa saaoyaIsaazI AapNa mhNajao dIGa- AaiNa . mhNajao áhsva
Asao samajaU. maga %yap`maaNao Kailala gaT haotat
. . . namana na
. . samara sa
. . janaasa ja
. yamaacaa ya
. . Baaskr Baa
. raiQaka ra
. tarap ta
maanaavaa maa
. laGau
gau$
hyaa gaTanna kaay mhaNataat te paN athavat nahiye. RShubha tulaa mahitey ka he?
Anilbhai thanks. bhaskarach ahe te
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